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Doodlekaboodle 03-19-2007 05:44 AM

Critique me!!
 
I would like pricing suggestions .. i already opened an art shop, but i dont think my pricing is accurate .. suggestions??
Bochu - [ x ]
Izzy - [ x ]
Dango - [ x ]
Doodle - [ x ]

also, tell me what you like/dont like about my art. i would really like to know!

Doodlekaboodle 03-19-2007 05:51 AM

suggest!

Doodlekaboodle 03-19-2007 06:01 AM

anyone have anything to say, at all?

Doodlekaboodle 03-19-2007 06:03 AM

-waits.-

Wood Sorrel 03-19-2007 11:27 AM

  • Be patient! Multiple posting like that is not liked here.

    As for your art... It's quite nice overall, though I'm not a fan of large wide-set eyes like that. You just need a little refining of anatomy. Practice drawing moving people (really quick sketches just to get the feel of the movement) and your characters will look less stiff.

Jawful 03-19-2007 11:37 AM

i'd pay 50 gold

if you get it done in less than a week instead of being pompous like every other commission artist and taking as long as you want (i.e. putting it off for months and shitting it out in two hours because you want the gold) i might tip an extra 10 gold or so :)

Lucida 03-19-2007 06:07 PM

i like the detailness of it, but you should work a little cleaner and be more patient with your art. in some pictures, the eyes come out a bit scary, which i think they shouldn't...?
Overall the pictures are not bad, they could be better though if you took a bit more time with your lineart. ^^

i can't say anything for the pricing, i am not that firm with pricing on menewsha yet...

Doodlekaboodle 03-19-2007 07:09 PM

Thanks for all your suggestions!

ChibiMaru-Chan 04-13-2007 07:38 PM

I like them. I think I'll give a 9/10
This is just as i think of it...
A little comment from me...
:D

mangacatgirl 04-13-2007 11:16 PM

It's a very interesting style that you have. The colouring could use a bit more refinement in my opinion. Overall they are quite nice though.

KirbehIshCute 04-13-2007 11:16 PM

Seem them Doodle. Love 'em. <333

Dr.Seiji 04-14-2007 09:07 AM

I'd say the line quality may need to be refined a bit. More light and shadow for skin. Especially the eyes. I do agree with previous critiques : ) take your time working on the details. Overall is pretty good tho.


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