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I would like some imput on some artwork of mine.
Hello, my name is Vestien, or Krispykrunchie on Deviantart.
I would like some feedback one some of the artwork i had done before i had dug deep into my finals. But, now that im done, i can do more work for myself (at least for a little bit). Anyway- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...estien02-1.png (my avatar on Gaia) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...e-WIPcolor.png (This is only a WIP cause i did this in PChat and my computer died... so, i couldnt finish... however, i might finish this via OpenCanvas.) |
I was like... "Vestien, I know that name..."
Indeed I do, it seems. X3 |
The artwork of your avatar is quite lovely ^^ I'm a big fan of pencil work. With that WIP I find the legs a bit thick--unless that's perspective, and the folds of the skirt look too sharp to be fabric. Other than that I love your art style ^__^
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Ah ... that's awesome.
I love the WIP one. Your style is great. :] |
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I shall work on legs a bit more (i got this same comment from a teacher of mine) the skirt... i was mostly sketching it out... and never got to go back in and do better lines, but, thank you for your input. Im glad that you like my style. I will try to do some more work here in the next week ^___^ |
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I like your style as well.
The face to both of them just seems to be a little off. In the first one the shape of the head throws the face off a little and in the second the one eye seems a bit away from the nose and the other eyes seems a little too big. Other then that, like it was said, the legs. Over all you did really well. |
Holy crap! I love your style a lot! *3* Very nice pencil work as well as CG work!
I do notice your thick legs/thighs style. To many people it might seem unproportional, but I also think it could be a style. XD Art doesn't have to be too proportional, does it? ^^; I actually like it the way they are :3 <3 |
I really like the WIP cause it seems to be more human-esc kind of expressions. And adore the cuteness of the outfit and character.
Also. Don't care if the legs seem wrong. I know I make mine "Sailor Moon" long, so I'm not one to complain. You're on DA? Hmmm.... I may need to check your art out sometime. 8) |
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