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Koyuki 03-26-2007 11:13 PM

A GaiaOnline Avi Edit
 
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m...swithtatoo.jpg

I made up the character. D;

Suggetions on how to improve it? I'm trying to make it look perfect, even though nothing's perfect. Especially from me. xD

Mondai Kodomo 03-27-2007 01:23 AM

Well, I'm not a pixel artist, but I was thinking that perhaps you should make the highlights and shadows a bit more contrasty? It kinda looks flat right now.

Koyuki 03-27-2007 01:38 AM

Will do.

killuachanx3 03-27-2007 01:55 AM

o: Whoa it looks really cool. yeah what mondai said..

but i guess if youre going for the dark look, it looks pretty cool. :333

Koyuki 03-27-2007 01:59 AM

I am going for the dark look.
I think the end of the dress is to like...straight. Dx i don't know how to fix it and still make it look good.

killuachanx3 03-27-2007 02:33 AM

I dont know much about pixels. Never tried. oxo;; But I guess it depends on the shading and try curving it and not make it straight..? o__o;;;

Koyuki 03-27-2007 03:14 AM

I just don't know where to curve.

GainaSpirit 03-27-2007 07:13 AM

You got the pixel quite right on the hair bit it'll would probably look better if you only use pixel and not tools. It's contrasting a bit too much with the body.

Koyuki 03-27-2007 09:02 PM

Okay, though I'm not really good at shading with pixels.

Koyuki 03-31-2007 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kazunomiya_Nanoshi
It looks a tad dull, unless you meant to do that.
And, try not to be so negative about your work. That will help a ton. =)

I don't think I'm negative. I'm just aware of my skill.

crystalrev 03-31-2007 11:27 PM

I love the hair and the body but I think you need more "uniqueness" in the outfit. ^^;

Koyuki 03-31-2007 11:58 PM

I didn't want it to be anything special.

ChibiMaru-Chan 04-06-2007 06:22 PM

Nice...i like it. if only they did have that kind thing on Gaia...all the stuff there is very expensive right now...o.o but I like it very much! :D

Koyuki 04-06-2007 07:45 PM

Well, thank you. :3

mangacatgirl 04-07-2007 02:40 AM

I really like it, you did a fantastic job. If anything, the only thing I could suggest as any sort of improvement would be that the bottom of the skirt seems a bit too straight. It's pretty much one solid line. Perhaps curving it a bit to go with the body's natural shape might be better? Either way I think it's fantastic. And bravo on the character design concept as well.

Koyuki 04-07-2007 03:21 AM

Well thanks. The problem with the skirt is I don't know where to curve it to make it look right. D;

mangacatgirl 04-07-2007 03:52 AM

Oh, I see. Well, when I'm stumped to know how a certain garment would lie, when drawing... I research it. I put a on a similar item and pose that way and look in the mirror. Or I do an image search for whatever kind of thing it is (skirt, shirt, blouse, vest, duster, gown, whatever). I look at the different images and poses to see how the material moves and use that knowledge toward drawing it myself. You might try that. It couldn't hurt! ^.^

Koyuki 04-07-2007 08:12 PM

That's alot of help, thanks. ^^

Rawrr__x 04-07-2007 11:22 PM

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the hair is a tad to high off the head on thedress you could use a bit more of shading you could also add some sort of a plushie that always makes the work look spectacular

Koyuki 04-08-2007 02:51 AM

A plushie is a bit off of what I'm going for.


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