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Emii 04-14-2007 03:17 PM

This is a song that I wrote
 
OKay, don't steal this song, and even though it's crappy, don't insult it either.

Lucky Star

I will wish on my shining star tonight
Maybe it will come true


I’ll catch my star
Put it in my pocket
And never let it fade away
Never fade away, oh oh


My star isn’t perfect
But it’ll shine
Brighter than yours tonight


Twinkle, twinkle
Little star
How I wonder what you are
Up above my head so high
Like a diamond in the sky
Twinkle, twinkle
Little Star
How I wonder what you are

My star isn’t perfect
But it’ll shine
Brighter than yours tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
On my wishing star tonight
I wish…

Shakey 04-14-2007 03:23 PM

Aww, it's very nice ^^

lilazngirl100 04-18-2007 10:26 PM

It's a nice song! But your kind of stealing Twinkle Twinkle Little Star into it. But I still like it! Wonder how it sounds like in real life!

Donna 04-18-2007 10:28 PM


Why would you say not to steal the song when most of it, if not all of it, was stolen by you? -.-

Buckwheat Noodles 04-18-2007 10:31 PM

Uh, dear? If you don't think it's very good, then why post it?

Also, this is the wrong forum, methinks. Try the Music forum; I've seen some other lyric threads in there.

ChibiTotoro222 04-18-2007 11:02 PM

MOVE'D :DDDD <3

It's pretty, btw~ x3 <3

twizted child eve 04-19-2007 12:53 AM

Aw. That is a nice song!

Voluptuous Harlot 04-19-2007 12:55 AM

We're not allowed to insult it or steal it?
Then why bother posting it if all you want is praise?

xDark_Midnightx 04-20-2007 10:49 PM

Song
 
Average...it would be good but some of the lyrics from twinkle twinkle little star is copied


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