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Untitled Poem
As with my other poem posted in this forum, I would love constructive criticism and comments. They are very much appreciated!
No capitalization or punctuation was used when this was written, so I didn't add it when I typed it. Were I to really publish this or enter it in a contest, I might add some. Occasionally I think that the lack of capitalization and punctuation adds to the idea that this piece is one thought. It depends on what day it is! OK, I'll stop rambling. Here goes~ Oh, and title suggestions are welcome! Untitled running wind rushing past ears hearing past the wind graceful bounds swift leaps incarnate of free spirit regally crowned running gracefully in the wrong direction hurdling* into reality faster than physically possible destroying three lives with one graceful bound death on four legs *hurdling/hurtling--I haven't decided yet. Ideas? |
I you'd be able to name this poem "Graceful Bounds" because it says it twice in the poem. Plus, I think the title matches the poem in a way.
I love this poem as the other one. It's really cute. I really do hope you continue posting and making new poems. |
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