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What I crave- a poem
Thy brilliance blinds me,
Mine eyes close, In attempt to block it out I stumble, My quest for darkness – Consumed by light And those who would Take thy hand and lead thee, Close thine eyes in Ignorance |
It's short and simple. I like it, it's almost opposite from the normal "run in to the light" sort of poem. Good work.
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yayyyyyyyyyy!!!! thankies! I kind of like it too... in a way that only the author can like it. kind of the 'its ok, it was the mood at the time' way ^^
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Well those types of poems are often the best, even if only the author or other authors like them ^.^
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are you an author yourself?
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Yeppers, mostly poems but I am working on a few books.
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Wowwwww awesome! My older sister finished a book she had been working on for a year and a half just a few months ago, and already she's working on another! -.-; I dont understand writing books. If you've seen some of my other work I already posted on Mene, I usually stick to wierd little poems, and some really short stories
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Some people work better in condensed form. I think that most of the motivation behind writing books is to see how the lives/stories of the characters and world that you have created turn out. Most of the time authors don't even know the end of the book until it is finished, at least most that I have met.
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That's an awesome poem!! I can't write poetry to save my life.
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A dime to you, a quarterback social insecurities hang off your back _________ Watermelon and pomegranate summer heat so hot get a man to fan it! |
I love to write poetry, but I can't really write anything else. ^^
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