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my poems
Life of a Teenager
Life is full of thrills, And life can be rough, Yet life is full of chills, And life can be tough, Making decisions, Fulfilling your dreams, Choosing your future, Isn't easy as it seems, Dealing with pressure, Dealing with school, As people criticize you, They make you look like a fool, Drama and gossip, Floating around, People are talking, No truth to be found, Hang out with friends, So the fun never ends, Don't drink and drive, ..Maybe then you'll save a life, Becareful who you trust... Take a risk if you must, Share all your laughter Smile everyday Forget all your problems It's better that way, Just know who you are, Believe that you can make it Live your life to the fullest. And try not to break it. and another ^^ Selfish Mistake I can't believe its ending All I see are hospital walls Things would have been different If to temptation I did not fall. That night was so crazy Pouring drinks and feeling fine But the mood was going to quickly change It was just a matter of time. I took one shot and then another My throat burning as they went down My body's floating, my mind is spinning Everyone's playing around Midnight came fast, I had to go For I knew I had curfew Behind the wheel, I go and there it ends Through the windshield my body flew Now I'm dying from my selfish mistake I'll miss my family, I'll miss my friends How my heart cries, 'This can't be real' This truly can't be the end'.. |
They're both so pretty! You're such a good writer! I write kind of offish poems too, so I understand how hard it is to actually put up writing for other people to see and critique.. :D
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I really liked them. I liked the first one, it is so true...actually, scratch that, they are both so true. I can really relate to the first one though.
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