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No name. No boundary.
Birth, come with nothing.
A simple pleasure, momentarily. A brief wish, coming any day. Live happily, for a while. Do what you want, eventually. Find yourself, if you're lucky. Enlightenment, count your merits. Love, at least once. Selfless, may fortunes come to you. Everlasting memories, happened. Make dreams, 'cause you need them. Seek reality, when dreams vanished. Seek God, when it hurts. Lost, without believing. Frustration, without guidance. Headaches, never leaves completely. Living, pretend it's worthwhile. Dying, welcome home. ---------------------------------------- Something I wrote one day. Dunno what the title is. :D ---------------------------------------- The Things I say. (This one has a title. xD lol.) In a moment of anger You find me speak the language of a stranger In a moment of happiness Words become gibberish more or less In a moment of depression There's no hope and no more passion In a moment of attention There's no language, no communication In a moment of catching one's eyes Words turn to left from right In these moments of emotions They're nonetheless nonsense with one exception The stage of tranquility and peace Those words won't bent or grease Little time do I find myself Speaks the beliefs in my inner shell Always miscommunication and misplace The right words, and the right face Take a moment and look at the things I say Take as much as long as you may Keep in mind my words are straight Only half of my truth hides from what I say |
xD In all honestly, I didn't get the first poem. It made sense to me then it didn't and then it did. xD It's not so rhyme-y that one. xD
In a moment of catching one's eyes Words turn to left from right And this one from your second poem doesn't rhyme. xD Throws off the constant rhyme you had through out the second poem. *nods* But other then that, it looks good. ^^ |
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