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WIP- critique please?
Ok, so here's a peice i started a while back, and I've progressed a bit since this picture was taken, but not anything really major. a bit more shading has been put in, but I was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism maybe?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...z/DSCN0541.jpg http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...z/DSCN0540.jpg oh, and just FYI, I've already taken care of the kind of really dark lines you see under her eye. I semi erased it, and made it alot lighter, so it doesn't look like she's an insane insomniac druggie anymore ^^ |
Oo!
Very good.^_^ I really like her eyes. From them I see evilness and as well as sadness and a bit of mystery. |
I love the eyelashes. Though something about the shape of the head is a little off, the left side seems too small. Other than that is is shaping up well.
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you need some more shading more lights and darks so it doesn't look so flat and maybe some texture specially in the hair!
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