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Poems
Yeah... I'll just make one thing to avoid me making oodles of pages for all of my poems.
False Reflections You see the person put before you But I am different every day I turned my back on who I was long ago Now, I am whoever you want me to be This mask I wear is ever changing Like I mirror, I reflect whatever I see Shattered glass, reflecting many images at once Depending on whose eyes gaze upon me I am a piece with no real place Yet you can fit me anywhere in the puzzle My mold can change I can be too easily forced To adjust to my surroundings Fragile words have lulled your trust How many have you believed? Anymore, I don’t even have an idea How many of the words I say are true One minute I am made for you And only for you Later I am someone else Some one you never knew Open your eyes And look beyond your denial See past my false reflections And look into the face of the true me Can you still love me as you did before? |
Well written,well done :!:
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Shadows
How often have I stood beside you, When you did not see? How often have I spoken to you, When you have not replied? Have I simply become your shadow, Forever following, yet rarely seen? I have never felt so alone in my life Yet, I am surrounded by people How many of them know I'm there? Can't you at least think of me long enough To give me a wave? A smile? Anything? I do not want to be a shadow I fear that I have been forgotten. Does that mean that I am dead? But I still have a pulse, I still breath Maybe in this sense I am not truly dead Only dead to the world In that case, I will walk away Why are you stopping me? Do you not want me to go? Shall I simply stand there and be ignored? Tell me, Why am I loved only when I'm gone? What reason do I have to remain here? I see… Then perhaps I am not a shadow But an imaginary friend Someone whom you only speak to When no one else is around An echo from your childhood Am I supposed to be content with that? I suppose I must be… For I shall never receive anything more, it seems. At least now I know how my shadow must feel I will have to afford her more attention from now on. We can have fun together. I may walk beside you, But my shadow is the only one who walks beside me… |
Hands of Time
Where did time begin? What was the start of it all? What drives the hands of time forward? Why never back? Every choice ever made Affects the never ending flow of time How many new paths have been created? How many possible futures have been destroyed? We all know of history, Time already passed, events set in stone But what of the future? It is still like clay Taking whatever shape it is molded into How can you be certain that the design you’re creating Is the way that you really want your future to develop? For once done, it is history And time flows on for infinity But… Does not Infinity run both ways? After all, we have seen history repeat itself many times. However, the hands of time do not flow in circles Nor can they simply follow a single unwavering path Remember how the choices you make Affect the shape of time’s mold Humanity continues to repeat its mistakes That is the only reason that time ever flows in circles The hands of time drive themselves forward However, we are the ones behind the wheel |
I adore the words you use.
I like how it flows. I love the stanzas. It's well rounded and really don't steer off of the path like a lot of people do. I really like them... a lot. Wonderful Job, keep writing. |
Thank you. ^^
(Err... I need to keep a better eye on my comments.) |
Silent Listener All around I hear them Problems, worries, fears I listen in silence My heart goes out to them all They scream I cry They laugh I smile Then a question asked of me A somber plea for help I tell all that I know They care nothing for what I say My turn to speak My mind churns with thoughts No one ever hears My voice falls upon deaf ears Over and over again I am told all I wish not to hear Expectation met I am still listening |
Your poems are beautiful.
They flow nicely together. I noticed you use free-verse. Why do you use it so much? Is it just because you like it better or you just didn't notice? |
I like writing free verse.
It's easier for me to do since I'm not having to worry about what word goes where so much. And I am not so great at rhyming. ^^; |
Poem
Sorry i posted these poems on another topic but thought i would post it here as well. i hope you dont mind.
Death Looking on ever so piercing gaze, Eyes that stab through your soul. Waiting in thee unseen, still as statues lay a hunger for souls that time will give Each day once lived passes on, but still he waits. A cold air has passed, eyes gaze down upon thy lifeless shell sleep for eternity...... As worms feast on thy flesh he moves creeping slowly toward thy resting place he reaches out for you. With your soul you must pay for your life lived each day....... now has ended. Lost To Love A life so lost and bleak, A soul with no reason to be. Whats this that thy seek A feeling that so has lost from memory A dream that yet to touch reality. A quest for this feeling A search for the illusive Has left me inconclusive. As days have passed, many lives have been lost Lives all searching for this feeling This emotion that brings us meaning True love is what i seek. At last my quest has ended... I have found heavens lost angel Tangled in despair, my life im willing to share For it is you Rebecca that made my dreams come true So this poem is to thank you For all you have done... hope you like it ; ; |
They're very nice, Rai. ^^
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thx
Thank you, i hope to have more when i am in a writing mood, im not a writer in anyway... these were brought on by strong emotions ; ; maybe soon i will write something else.
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Well, when you do, feel free to post them here. ^^
I just write and see whatever comes out. Half of my stuff is just a bunch of jumbled thoughts mixed with a keyboard. |
The floor is dampend by each trickle.
The room filling with sounds takeing each breath as it's own. The moon glimmers endlessly search for a smile. Not a wind in the dark can break this feeling. The feeling of sorrow, grief and misundertsnading will take you away from the world. Mid-night passes slowly with each tick of the everlasting clock. Each day passes slower and slower. because only time can mend a broken heart. not only can it mend that sadness inside it helps regain your courage. With each passing hour rember every heart can be saved from internal sadness. |
Nice, KiraKira. ^^ |
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You really think it's that good? Wow thanks a bunch, anyone want to see more? |
Um... Sure. ^^ |
Nice work
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i hope time has healed you pain... because time sure as hell feels it need not to speed things up for me lmao |
XD Time hates humanity. It likes being slow and painful. |
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Haha. XD I'd love to do that. >.> It goes too fast for me. I'm already almost 18 D: I have a peter pan complex. XD I like being a kid. lol |
Peter. . . Pan?
O.O lol lucky you . . . lol almost 18 har har times still so sweet when you're 18 ; ; meh im teh old ... and time moves so slow -_- if it moves at all.
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lol yeah. ^^; Well, about all I get done is RPing, and I stay home all the time doing nothing but living on the internet, so yeah... ^^; The day's over before I even realize it. lol |
time
yar, i spend all my time online too, but i spend it well ^^
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lol yep. Hey, writing gets up my English skills. XD Or kills them. >.> One of the two. lol I think all of the red and green confetti in the word document is just my crappy typing skills more than spelling errors. lol |
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