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Alexandrus Gambino 05-24-2007 02:40 PM

Losing Fight
 
Yesh... I made yet another poem... I should really write this down...

Can you see the losing battle I fight?
And it's dragging me into the abyss of my life.
'Cause I'm behind the losing battle I fight...
Forcing me to conform like a straight line...
When I want to deviate...

Edit: You know... I just realized that this isn't exactly a poem...

Kasana 05-24-2007 10:05 PM

Thats awesome, even if its not a poem, poems dont have to rhyme y'know. I love the flow of continuity.

Alexandrus Gambino 05-25-2007 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kasana
Thats awesome, even if its not a poem, poems dont have to rhyme y'know. I love the flow of continuity.

It's actually a song! I'll make it longer, so by the time I'm in college, I'll start a band. I'll be the vocalist and song writer, and we'll be an emo band.


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