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My newest artworks, yay. n_n;
Hi guys. [: I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this chibi headshot I made for my avatar:
http://i17.tinypic.com/5x3cphl.gif And this portrait thing of.. well, my OC, I guess. o_o; http://i14.tinypic.com/4kddtva.jpg Along with that, if I were to sell these on Menewsha, what price should I set them at? ^^; I'm still new, sooo... yeah. The prices here are way different than the ones on Gaia. XD; So if someone could estimate a suitable Menewsha price for them (especially the first one, hehe) that would be great. n A n <3 |
very cute ^_^
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Oh, I love your style~ My comment is to shade the white part of your cloak a bit more, so it's more detailed there. Overall, it's really cute already.
For the second picture, I really like the crisp lineart. Your colour choices are awesome, but once again, my comment is to shade some more. I mean, it's fine right now, but it'd look even spiffier if you had more shading. If you like your way of shading, or if that's the style you're trying at, then just ignore me. ;D In addition, the girl's body looks a tad strange, but that might be the shading. Anyways...it's better than most of the stuff I do, so be happy! |
They're both very nice!
I agree with Mirokarosu: Work on your shading! It will really add a new dimension to your artwork. |
Nyaaaa, I hate shading. XD
I'll keep practicing though. Thanks guys. n_n |
like super kawaii!! you should draw me! <3
when I get clothes on :oops: |
Aww, the first one is so cute and the second one is really pretty!
I dont buy art, but if I did, I'd probably buy the first one for 100g and the second one for 250g+ I'm not good at prices so I wouldnt know anyway xD |
I like how you add little accessories here and there, like the kiwi fruit(?) clip and neck tie pendant :D They make the pic looks uber cute.
However, *coughs coughs* excuse me for being nit-picky >.>;;; The way her forearm near the wrist suddenly slopes in that much makes it looks kinda unnatural for some reason and also make the hand looks bigger than it should be :? Also, the thumb is kinda too short, if you line up the other finger like that, the thumb would stick up higher than them or you'll have to lift the index finger up to press against the knuckle of the thumb for a firm grip for the popsicle. As for Mirokarosu's comment about something strange with the body, I think it's because the body is unbalanced; it leans too much to our left side. If you draw a line for the right shoulder, you'll fine the right shoulder will stick too far from the body and in the angle like this, the body will lean more to our right side because she's turning to the left and we're suppose to see the depth of body, thus it should push the outline to be farther from the normal frontal view. I hope what i said makes sense =w=;;; trying to explain something for a non-native English speaker is so much problem.... I hope that helps :) |
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I really suck at human anatomy. = w =; And I hate to draw hands. <.<; Which is why her hand is kinda.. half-assed. XD; |
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