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"She Whispers Sweet Lies" free verse poem
This is a little free verse poem I wrote a few years back. It was one of my first, but a lot of people seem to like it...and I need gold...so I'm posting it... >.< Lol. You can tell me what you think if you'd like. But just a little heads up, if you don't like my poem, just say it. Don't tell me that I have no talent in writing poetry. That's like flipping to a random page in a book and saying that it sucks.
She Whispers Sweet Lies She whispers sweet lies Into his ear And he listens closely, On the verge of sleep "I wish you a night's peace," She whispers so sweet, Her voice like that of an Angel's The man nods his head So snug in his bed And listens without a doubt, For his sweet Angel's words Seemed to always ring true And never were they of deceit She brought him a cup, With water so pure As pure as she, he thought. "Close your eyes," she whispered again, "And I will protect you, my dear." She whispers sweet lies, Into his ear And he listens closely, So sure of her words She drops a pill into the cup, "Your medicine, my dear." She brings the cup up to his lips, Whispering once more. "I promise you, my sweet husband, Your medicine-it helps. Drink it down, and rest your head, Sleep shall soon come." She smiles sweetly, After whispering her sweet lies "And I promise you, My sweet husband, You shall not wake From any bad dreams." And for once, this woman This Angel of Deceit, Whispered something true. For the man would not wake From bad dreams, no, He would not wake at all. But before the man fell Into an eternity of sleep, She whispered one last sweet lie The grandest, sweetest lie of her life, "I love you, my dear husband, And I always will." |
ZOMG I've heard that free verse poem before
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But I think that I have only heard it once or twice. I really like it and think that it is really cool, I like the biggest lie that she ever told him ^^ tehe.... I also like the one truth that that "angel of deceit" told
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