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A poem I wrote, just looking for feedback
I just wrote this, I'd like some feedback :D
Tell me a story, lead me away Let me hear all that I want you to say Ask me a question, smirk as I squirm 'No, I can't tell you', but please remain firm Read me a poem, wind in the reeds The sun can't get through the mad tangle of weeds I'm waiting, just waiting for reasons to write Reasons to laugh, cry, sing, blush and fight 'She's a nut, but we love her' Is that what I've got? Do I really need more than soft levels of thought? Take it easy and listen, the day is still light The stars will be bright when the clouds clear tonight |
I think its very nice. I especialy like the last two lines.
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Thank you
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I LOVE IT!! you are a natural. much better than me.
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Yay, thank you so much for saying that :oops:
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