Menewsha Avatar Community

Menewsha Avatar Community (https://www.menewsha.com/forum/index.php)
-   Poetry (https://www.menewsha.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=128)
-   -   Poem! (https://www.menewsha.com/forum/showthread.php?t=60839)

SadiKitten 06-09-2007 07:02 PM

Poem!
 
why can't you see it?
when i look in ur eyes i just can't believe it;
you make me want to dance
but i know it just can't be a romance
cause your heart is in your hands
and ur not willing to let it have plans
i just wish i could know
if i could ever be ur glow
cause i just want to be with you
but now i don't have a clue
so i'm done for now
i'm trying not to cry some how
but when you find out
where your heart lies without a doubt
please let me know
so my tears can finally flow

&Sadi;;

It's about my best friend
& how much i really really love him
-sigh-

SadiKitten 06-09-2007 07:08 PM

What do you think of it?

Does it need work?

If so, what needs work?



All times are GMT. The time now is 08:13 PM.