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Flying Wings 06-23-2007 02:51 AM

My latest poem O:
 

G B D G
As easy as 123
Sustaining left hand
Just like a bass in a band
Come down right hand!
Where I lay down on the sand
Make sure that left hand isn't too loud
Otherwise the teacher will yell
Oh sweet Prelude
Play a la la fei
For me!


Havn't wrote poems in forever! x_______X The style kind of changes...So give critique? <3

thelittleviolist 06-25-2007 01:07 AM

Haha! Made me smile...

What is it about, exactly? Are you playing an instrument or singing?


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