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Miss Charlaine 06-30-2007 09:18 PM

Mother Giraffe
 
I wrote this in math class at the end of the year. Our teacher had nothing to teach us in math so she told us to write poetry. xD

Mother Giraffe

Her neck was so long that it reached to the moon
Looking over the clouds that at night turn to blue
She could tell that the stars were happy to be there
And that her daughters and sons would never leave here

Celestial 06-30-2007 09:25 PM

  • Aw, it paints such a sweet image. ^^

    You should make it a bit longer though.

    Otherwise, it's cute. :)

Miss Charlaine 06-30-2007 09:27 PM

Thanks! :)
I probably will make a continuation. ^^


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