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Sylemn 07-01-2007 06:06 AM

At least I tried. D:
 
I wish I had a scanner, but unfortunately I don`t, so I sketched this on a sheet of paper, took a picture of it with my camera, and uploaded it onto the computer. Then I colored it using my little tablet. :]

She`s my OC. What do you think?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...t/0b0028ef.jpg

Varicose 07-01-2007 08:46 AM

  • It's awesome, obviously 8)

    Her chest looks a little wonky, but maybe not everyone stares at chests as much as I do :wink:

    Her hair and facial expressions are beyond great, though, and your anatomy skills are admirable 8)

    I'm usually not a fan of reds, also, but this drawing is quickly making me change my opinion :)

Kasimir De 07-01-2007 09:09 AM

Well, the shoulder-chest area definitely has something wrong but not the chest itself; it's how the angle of shoulder area totally conflicts with the angle the torso from chest down is turning to. I guess you changed your mind at the last minute, eh? >_o

So yeah, it like the angle of the shoulder are and the angle the torso is actually turning to is 90 degrees different. That's why the shoulder on our right is off, it's too bulge for the angle it's supposed to be according to how the torso is turning to. While the torso is showing that the body is turning to our right, yet the angle of the area from shoulder shown other wise; it's more like that area is is a normal frontal view or even slightly turning to our left. I made a rough draw over so you can see how the shoulder and the neck are supposed to be in order to go along with the angle the torso is in:
http://i11.tinypic.com/63hv6ur.jpg

I hope that help~ *nods nods*

Swansong 07-01-2007 01:43 PM



:.: I'm so terrible at critiques...
I really like this picture! And I love the coloring.

The hand is akward (But I'm not one to talk since I can't draw hands "Humans just shouldn't have hands they should have Nubs like chibis" XD). Her chest does look a little odd. But other then that I really like the pic! You did a wonderful job on it! Adding the color really gave it a nice look! And the shines from her jewlery really stand out!

You draw very lovely eyes!
Anyway best of luck on future artwork~! *Scampers away*

Suspense 07-01-2007 03:34 PM

She's very pretty :3 I think it's already been said, but her breasts look...irregular xD But apart from that, it's excellent :3

Julianna 07-01-2007 05:13 PM

  • ♥ » i really lovee your drawing! its super pretty. x3
    but the left shoulder does look a bit large,
    other than that it looks really good. <3

Varicose 07-01-2007 06:20 PM

  • I think Kasimir went slightly too far with the "advice". I'd probably get somewhat insulted, even. Dunnoe, lulz.
    And the chest area is somewhat wonky, now I can place my finger on it- the way the... uh, bra is drawn at the left side of her right breast. But you're better than "Ho shit awesome", and that's more than I can shake a stick at.

PsychoPoetic 07-01-2007 08:31 PM

Ooooh. :3~!
I've seen your art before *-*~
I've always loved your faces<3

I think everyone has already did the job of constructively critizising it..and pointing out the small areas I would check out.. xD
so I'll just say that you did a great job with the details.
It's beautiful !

RozeRibbons 07-01-2007 11:37 PM

oh wow that GORGEOUS!!!!!
i would buy that art if i had the gold

foggyday 07-02-2007 02:27 AM

That looks pretty!!>w<
i love the style..
and the affect of the paper?XD..
good job..the white highlights were put great^^

Akemi 07-02-2007 04:14 AM

Her face/body are really pretty, a very delicate style. The chest/shoulder part was already mentioned so I'll just point out the arms are too short and the hands are too small...
The elbow usually reaches the waist and the tips of your fingers come to about mid-thigh. So the right arm that's bent and touching her head is a little closer to the right proportions, but the left is too short. And hands are approximately the same size as the face.

Caeluma 07-04-2007 04:06 PM

very nice so pretty me likey!

Saz 07-04-2007 05:10 PM

Wow! So beautiful! Even if there are somethings that could use some tweaking ^_^
I love the sketchie-ness and the way you colored it. Very cool =D
Do you have a DA account by any chance? 'Cause I'd love to see more of your work n_n please let me know, ok?

I am also new here, so if you'd like, we could be friends :D

Saz 07-04-2007 05:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Saz
Wow! So beautiful! Even if there are somethings that could use some tweaking ^_^
I love the sketchie-ness and the way you colored it. Very cool =D
Do you have a DA account by any chance? 'Cause I'd love to see more of your work n_n please let me know, ok?

I am also new here, so if you'd like, we could be friends :D

I just went to check out your myspace. You are so adorable! X3


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