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Critique me, please?~
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^^ click for full view~ ;O Warning, a bit of blood again, this ones a bit bloody ((Please do tell me if it is against the rules to post a bit of gore/risque art. I read through the ToS/Rules a few times and couldn't find anything. I will remove it promptly if so =] )) |
Heeey Plum :3
As usual your art is so lovely! The way you color is so soft that even though the content is a little violent it's that eerie kind of serenity. It's awesome that you can do that <3 In your first piece, the hair is absolutely lovely. It looks so soft. You did an awesome job with the shading. In the entire piece I'd say work on the booby area XD It kinda looks boxy and strict. Breasts can be strict into clothing but it doesn't seem "plush" enough if you know what I mean >>''' The second one, it's just pretty :3 But his shoulders seem too square. And the third one is just too cute. You do such an awesome job with hair! I'd say the only thing missing in that one is the guy's legs and that's it really lol |
*waves to April*
Thanks <3 ^^ First one - I always end up spending so much time on the hair. Good to know it pays off. =D ah, Ill have to look into the boob thing. Second - OH!~ Just noticied that as well. I'll fix that too. Thanks for the heads up Third - Knew I forgot something XD; *cough* for the time being, he only has one leg *cough* >.> again, thanks for the feedback ;) |
Bahaha XD Yea, the world doesn't have enough handsome one legged men XD
And no problem :3 I love to help! <3 |
Wait, do you have the same username as on gaia? If so then you art is as good as always. For the first one. I think there is some problem with the boobs. I know you want full big ones. But they look small but full...
And there is the problem with the right leg. The topper part should be larger then the downer part. Second art I think there is something wrong with the shoulder. And maybe his nose, but then maybe not. 3rd The boobs again. And the back, not curved enough. And maybe the length of her legs, to short. Are you the one that submit a lot of colored line art in art contests on gaia? |
And hi, I joined today too. I'm the_midnight_angel on gaia. We participated in 1 or 2 contest together. It's scary that I remember the usernames of the contestants. How did you find this site?
Hope you like it here. If you want to get rich fast then I seguest open an art shop. like me. lol. |
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First one - actually, I wasn't going for unrealistically big ^^ Trust me, those aren't small compared to irl chests =P and I just noticied the leg error. Thanks =D Second - yeah, April mentioned the squarness. With his nose, perhaps its too high up (although I kind of like it ^^ ) Third - shes supposed to be flat-ish ^^ You're right about her back, Ill fix thats as well. Her legs go under the table, so its actually in correct porpotion (the table makes it look wrong, though. Ill see if I can fix that too ) Thanks for the advice!~ =D @your other post - Oh, I think I remember seeing you around gaia I found it because April posted it in an auction thread we're in ^^ and I do ^^ and I will, when I figure out some prices (and finish some commisions >.>; ) |
I know the difficulty for prices. I go for halfbody line art for 200g and colored halfbody in color pencils for 350g. ^^ Which it's still difficult to adjust to the new value of gold. lol
Looking forward to see you around in the art section. Wait... we are in the art section... Then to the shop section then! |
Your art is simply lovely! >3<~~~
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That's amazing art :]
The only improvments I think you should make are: On her right arm it looks rubbery... I'm not sure how to explain but arms bend not curve. And that's about it. I'm sorry I can't give a more clear explaination. >< |
the first one is very sexy! And beautifuly coloured! But the other ones are kinda weird!
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Sadistix - thank you ^^ Crystal - I still feel wierd when I see art for 300g .___.; It makes me want to tell the person they deserve 20k, and then I remember gold is worth more here XD; Caeluma: hehe ^^ thanks <3 the other ones are supposed to be a bit on the odd side |
i really love how you did the hair in the first one :3
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Now, the first one, I love. It might be that I love the risque qualities it has to offer, but I love it nonetheless. The soft colouring, the hair, the pose, the anatomy -- all flawless in my opinion. Very very gorgeous.
The other two made me icky. POOR TEDDY BEAR. T___T Great art, but I don't like the messages on those two. D: |
The first picture of the female is very hot, I love her outfit, her body, and her face. Very nicely done.
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The first I like. Though, I think her breasts are a bit too, erm.. full? for having so little support, and, with a strap on them (the one holding the shirt together), they would be kinda squished down.
Wow, that probably makes me sound really perverted. (more than I intended, anyway. °w°;;) |
Awsome pose and detail O__O this is fantastic!
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