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waiinuyaoi 07-28-2007 09:33 PM

In need of critique please !~
 
  • Well . . I started drawing this picture but stopped . .something seems off . . Could someone please tell me what mistakes I made and what I should do to fix it before I continue drawing the hair ?
    Also I would greatly love it if some one would highlight the things wrong in paint ; or try to fix it and circle the areas or something . . . Thankyou so much !!
    http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q...irl/style3.png
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    http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q...irl/eyesli.png
    ** edited picture
    And yup this was done in paint blahh

suppi 07-28-2007 10:47 PM

Ahh, that looks nice. I actually see nothing wrong with it..except the side of the face on the...right side, looks a bit..wide? Or maybe the chin..it's kind of pointy.. ^^; Sorry I couldn't help much. ><;

Caeluma 07-28-2007 10:55 PM

not much to critique but nice so far very cute

waiinuyaoi 07-28-2007 11:01 PM


Zoop 07-28-2007 11:40 PM

Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
x

suppi 07-28-2007 11:41 PM

Ah, it looks more...natural, you could say. ^^ Hm, it's probably that piece of hair that's making the drawing look kind of off. I mean the straight line part of it. Try making it more curvy? I may be wrong though. ^^;;

waiinuyaoi 07-28-2007 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoop
Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
x

  • Oh wow that helps so much ! o.o !!
    Thanks so much !

waiinuyaoi 07-29-2007 12:49 AM


Zoop 07-29-2007 03:34 AM

Ooh, looks good to me.
Good luck with finishing it! ^^

crystal_wings6 07-29-2007 03:52 AM

I don't see any probleme anymore, continue the good work!

waiinuyaoi 07-29-2007 06:43 PM


MiroshaxKerry 07-29-2007 08:04 PM

That was done in paint? O_O that is good, especially the eyes.. im trying to do them kind of eyes but i fail most of the time on paper as it is X_X

as for crit... not sure really except.. you know the eye lines? they should be down a lot more and add to them a little mroe as well ^^

also near the eye area try making a dent so it looks more eye like ^^

(edit): sorry i noticed thoses eye lines was eyebrows anyway make them eye brows longer and put eye lines just abouve the eyes ^^

waiinuyaoi 07-29-2007 08:21 PM


LunaFeather 07-29-2007 08:36 PM

I would be thinking that she would be looking the way her face was turned, it just kinda throws me off. But still, it's good, especially since it's done in paint.

Lady Taurus 07-30-2007 01:14 AM

I prefer the second style but both are good.


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