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In need of critique please !~
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Ahh, that looks nice. I actually see nothing wrong with it..except the side of the face on the...right side, looks a bit..wide? Or maybe the chin..it's kind of pointy.. ^^; Sorry I couldn't help much. ><;
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not much to critique but nice so far very cute
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Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~ x |
Ah, it looks more...natural, you could say. ^^ Hm, it's probably that piece of hair that's making the drawing look kind of off. I mean the straight line part of it. Try making it more curvy? I may be wrong though. ^^;;
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Ooh, looks good to me.
Good luck with finishing it! ^^ |
I don't see any probleme anymore, continue the good work!
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That was done in paint? O_O that is good, especially the eyes.. im trying to do them kind of eyes but i fail most of the time on paper as it is X_X
as for crit... not sure really except.. you know the eye lines? they should be down a lot more and add to them a little mroe as well ^^ also near the eye area try making a dent so it looks more eye like ^^ (edit): sorry i noticed thoses eye lines was eyebrows anyway make them eye brows longer and put eye lines just abouve the eyes ^^ |
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I would be thinking that she would be looking the way her face was turned, it just kinda throws me off. But still, it's good, especially since it's done in paint.
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I prefer the second style but both are good.
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