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Kris 08-24-2007 12:34 AM

Sunrise
 
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9386/sunrise2wg9.png

Eh...Sorry about the big name, I'm just a bit paranoid of people stealing my work. D:

Comments? Constructive feedback? Etc, etc.

SonicSweeti 08-24-2007 01:29 AM

i love the subtleness of the colors, very nice. a very calming effect. the placement on the canvas is a plus as well. good work.

Kris 08-24-2007 01:32 AM

Thanks! (:

Caeluma 08-24-2007 02:05 AM

maybe alittle briter colours and the sun not so close to the top bt it's really nice!

kimu 08-24-2007 03:36 AM

I suggest less of the fading type of style, making everything blend together and making it look like you tried too hard to do that.
Brighter colors are you friends on clouds, at least on the side of the mixture.
Lol, at least I think so when it comes to drawing clouds and such xD

BUTZ. Its awsome [ I critique too much ]

Kris 08-24-2007 08:32 PM

I tried to capture the the look that there was a thin cloud over the sun, which is why it looks the way it does. >w<;; I used soft colors because that's what the early sunrise around here looks like, so...yeah

And I like critiques, thank you both. :3

Kris 08-31-2007 11:37 PM

No other thoughts? D:

yanyan13 09-04-2007 01:49 PM

  • Please try not to double post, kris. The art post forum moves in a very slow pace, and there are people who actually browse each one of the threads here, and probably even the 2nd, 3rd, or so pages. Just be patient and wait ^_^

    well, i think it lacks a dark shade of color, but overall, the blending is nicely done ^_^


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