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Peanut 09-03-2007 06:25 PM

MY first Paint image~
 
  • Ya~
    I decicded to do my old avvi as a headshot in paint~

    And I was wondering, how's it look~?
    [x]
    Anything I could do to make it better?

    Thanks for your time~

Stephanie 09-03-2007 10:08 PM

Hey, for Paint without a tablet, thats pretty good.
My old drawings with just the bendy-line tool sucked Dx
Yours is pretty spiffeh though!

Peanut 09-03-2007 10:23 PM

  • Why thanks~
    Any tips, or improvement suggestions~?

.hidden melody. 09-03-2007 10:46 PM

It's pretty cute~. Better than anything I can do on paint without a tablet since I'm left handed. xD I like the eye the most. As for suggestions, you should shade everything, such as the skin and hair, otherwise it looks too flat. n_n Concerning anatomy though, I can't really help you since I'm not too good at that either. >>; If you practice a lot though you'll definitely keep getting better ;D

Peanut 09-03-2007 11:10 PM

  • I dunno where to shade though~
    The way I'm drawing, they usually have all those spiked looking things in their hair, so it's easy to shade~
    This one doesn't.
    D;

mangacatgirl 09-04-2007 01:26 AM

She could use some eye brows ^.^; It's not bad though.

Rinali Lee 09-04-2007 02:19 AM

I don't really use paint much, so I'm unsure as how to critique this. ^^;;

Like people said before, it's very good with no tablet o_o!!

A few suggestions though: shading. Most importantly, the hair--otherwise, it all looks like one piece of "fabric" sitting on her head. xDD

As for how to shade...you could pick a darker shade of brown and just sketch some lines throughout her hair, following the way the hair falls. It's not really "shading", but it gives it some depth. On the other hand, you could pick a lighter brown and give it a few highlights. ^^

Help this helped...? ^^;

Peanut 09-04-2007 02:46 AM

  • Ugh~
    I can't seem to shade it right~

yanyan13 09-04-2007 01:01 PM

  • it looks clean and neatly done, peanut ^_^

Peanut 09-04-2007 10:52 PM

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Originally Posted by yanyan13
  • it looks clean and neatly done, peanut ^_^

  • Orly~?
    Anything I could improve~?


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