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Lancer rider, revised -- CC please.
This is for my graphics design class and we're on a project to make a stamp for our school. Our school's mascot are lancers.
During my first sketch and we had a class critique, my cropping was bad 'cause there were a few things cut out of the picture and it was kinda boring. This is my second attempt at it. Excuse the dark spot in the corner. >.> My sketch book is too big for my scanner. And excuse it if it's too light. XD; Aaaand, sorry it's a bit fuzzy. x.x I've been told the lancer looks a bit feminine... So, I'd love more comments and critiques. :) I'm working on finalizing it this weekend. Edit: LOL, I didn't link the picture. HORSIIIIIIIIE. Revised. I haven't gotten any real critiques from anyone just yet...Since it's due tmorrow (9/25) and I finished ahead of time. I changed the front legs and tried to make it look more 'aggressive'. I don't think I did so well. And it looks like the lancer is falling off the horse. XD; And the lance is small, but I wanted it within the frame. ^^; And anyways, it's to be a stamp, it wouldn't look great is things were cut off...Damn hind legs... |
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YAY! A post. :)
Ah, well, I'm not sure about that. o.o The armor's detail isn't the greatest. I don't draw these things often and I used reference for the horse. x3 *doesn't know the anatomy* |
o.o;;; Good job on the lancer! The horse's front right leg looks kind of weird. ;>.>
Good job on it overall, though. Is it going to be colored? |
cool i love it! I love horsies!
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It's difficult for my to see, but from what I can distinguish, the horse and helmet look good. We need a nod emoticon, I wanted to put one here, but we don't have one. |
Thank you for the comments everyone!
@ Mage - Horses aren't my forte, I suppose. XD Eventually it'll be colored. @ Caeluma - Thanks. :] @ yanyan13 - Yeah...I'm not too knowledgeable on horse anatomy, I used a reference. I tried not to make the lance too short because it had to fit within the size we're given. And I was told about my bad cropping. XD Thanks for the help! :D @ Sanctuary - Ah, sorry it's light. I only resized after I scanned it. XD |
For some reason the horse's legs seem a bit fat...or short...or both...but I really like this - you draw armor very well and the dynamics of the pose are very nicely done :D ANd I love knights and horses sooo... :D beautiful job :D keep drawing :D
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Thanks! I think Medieval type thins are cool. And now that you bring up the legs...they do seem like it. ^^; All those details were made up by me as I went on. XDD
Thanks for the help once again. *nod* |
Pretty good on the revisions! However, the horse's legs look like there's one more joint that it shouldn't have...
Here's something for you to reference, it's done by my friend: here. |
Too much joint? xD I guess I put too much umph in it. :P
Thanks for the reference! *nodnod* |
Quote:
http://www.worldofhorses.co.uk/horse...nger_Horse.htm |
Nice work! Horses have always been difficult for me to draw! :D
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