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DreamEmpress 09-28-2007 04:54 AM

Elves and Other Stuff Mature Warning
 
Please feel free to critique my work or just comment. Please no stupid comments like "that is cool" or "that sucks" because I will ignore it and won't be worth my time and effort to argue why I don't like it.

Here is some new stuff. These are mainly concept art (ideas for a comic) and some ideas for character design. Yes the proportions are off but I am fixing that. I was just working with style ideas.

http://i22.tinypic.com/2i6f2it.jpg

This is concept art for a comic idea. The characters are kind of strange looking but I am working on it. First time ever drawing the characters and first time understanding what the hell I wanted to do. lol... It was kind of interesting how it came out. The issue is mainly with Marcus. His arms are messed up and I need to fix that. I also messed up on Juliet as well.

http://i20.tinypic.com/1045fdy.jpg

This one was just to see a different style. Her head is to small and her hand is large (I was trying to go for that but it didn't work out well). I have to still work on this style.

http://i21.tinypic.com/dz79s0.jpg

This one I am still working on currently. I just needed some crit on it. I know the errors but like to see some opinion.

Caghyre 09-29-2007 02:01 PM

Your drawings have a lot of creativity and originality! They would make a great comic.

Moon 09-29-2007 05:11 PM

I agree.
Very creative.
I like how the all look different.
[[my characters usually have similar clothes. x'D ]]

I'm liking that last one a lot.
Can't wait to see it colored. :]

N.O.O.D.L.E.S 09-29-2007 05:21 PM

For the most part these are really nice pictures. I would say, first off that the heads are too small for the'r bodies. Another thing I'd like to point out is their lower torsos (male and female) are very skinny, add a little fat or they'll look anorexic. What kind of markers did you use?

Jadiesama 09-29-2007 07:50 PM

marcus looks hawt, but you need to work on your male anatomy. guys' waists are not hourglass-shaped. You also need to work on drawing hands.

DreamEmpress 09-30-2007 01:26 AM

Juliets hand is backwards lol... I have to fix that and a bunch of other things. Thanks so much for the responses.

Caeluma 09-30-2007 08:22 PM

I like the details on the black and white one!

Fabby 10-01-2007 08:07 AM

They are gorrrgeous..
But on the smexy man up there.. I don't like how far in his waist goes. I'm figuring that's just a style thing, but with how buff he is his waist should be far less prominent.

DreamEmpress 10-01-2007 04:01 PM

Yes I agree with Marcus. I was trying a different style but it turned out a little strange. I have to work on him a little more and since my comic class gives me a chance too work on it, then I feel like I can accomplish him well soon. I still think I am sticking to the similar facial style but maybe bringing in a little more "comic" style too it.

iFury 10-07-2007 05:10 AM

These are neat!

Kavari 10-08-2007 12:08 PM

Interesting character designs.
You just need more practice on anatomy. :]


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