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Elves and Other Stuff Mature Warning
Please feel free to critique my work or just comment. Please no stupid comments like "that is cool" or "that sucks" because I will ignore it and won't be worth my time and effort to argue why I don't like it.
Here is some new stuff. These are mainly concept art (ideas for a comic) and some ideas for character design. Yes the proportions are off but I am fixing that. I was just working with style ideas. http://i22.tinypic.com/2i6f2it.jpg This is concept art for a comic idea. The characters are kind of strange looking but I am working on it. First time ever drawing the characters and first time understanding what the hell I wanted to do. lol... It was kind of interesting how it came out. The issue is mainly with Marcus. His arms are messed up and I need to fix that. I also messed up on Juliet as well. http://i20.tinypic.com/1045fdy.jpg This one was just to see a different style. Her head is to small and her hand is large (I was trying to go for that but it didn't work out well). I have to still work on this style. http://i21.tinypic.com/dz79s0.jpg This one I am still working on currently. I just needed some crit on it. I know the errors but like to see some opinion. |
Your drawings have a lot of creativity and originality! They would make a great comic.
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I agree.
Very creative. I like how the all look different. [[my characters usually have similar clothes. x'D ]] I'm liking that last one a lot. Can't wait to see it colored. :] |
For the most part these are really nice pictures. I would say, first off that the heads are too small for the'r bodies. Another thing I'd like to point out is their lower torsos (male and female) are very skinny, add a little fat or they'll look anorexic. What kind of markers did you use?
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marcus looks hawt, but you need to work on your male anatomy. guys' waists are not hourglass-shaped. You also need to work on drawing hands.
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Juliets hand is backwards lol... I have to fix that and a bunch of other things. Thanks so much for the responses.
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I like the details on the black and white one!
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They are gorrrgeous..
But on the smexy man up there.. I don't like how far in his waist goes. I'm figuring that's just a style thing, but with how buff he is his waist should be far less prominent. |
Yes I agree with Marcus. I was trying a different style but it turned out a little strange. I have to work on him a little more and since my comic class gives me a chance too work on it, then I feel like I can accomplish him well soon. I still think I am sticking to the similar facial style but maybe bringing in a little more "comic" style too it.
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These are neat!
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Interesting character designs.
You just need more practice on anatomy. :] |
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