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Vampirian Goddess 10-04-2007 11:33 PM

i M P R O V E M E N T - Comment?
 
Eh, I'm a little new here -pokes almost naked avatar- so I was wondering if I could some suggestions for improving my art? I was thinking of possibly opening an art shop here later on if anyone would buy ^^

Most of my samples are from Gaiaonline xD

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ndarkness2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...vveenbust1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ysfinblack.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...nafinished.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...yebilchibi.jpg

Vampirian Goddess 10-05-2007 01:01 AM

I have yet another sample, just finished a few minutes ago ^^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...aifinished.jpg

Caeluma 10-05-2007 02:54 AM

I love the things inteh corner they are pretty and give it a nice touch. I also love the teeth.

Vampirian Goddess 10-05-2007 03:09 AM

Aww, thank you very much ^^ <333
I'm assuming you're talking about my first pic, since that's the only one with a semi-border and decorations on the corner, along with teeth, I think xD

Sanctuary 10-05-2007 05:58 AM


Your borders and backgrounds are awesome.

I'm paticularly fond of the fan.

The hair is a lot better in the second example, but your prortions are off.

Try more shading under the nose to define it.

Vampirian Goddess 10-05-2007 03:10 PM

Thanks, I'll try that ^^

Peppermint 10-05-2007 06:57 PM

  • Wow. I think your art ish really pretty, dear. n___n
    keep up the good work.

Vampirian Goddess 10-06-2007 03:16 AM

Thank you very much for the opinon <33

iFury 10-07-2007 04:50 AM

I like it a lot... maybe work on proportions a little, but otherwise they're really good!

Jenn_heart 10-07-2007 08:05 PM

i like ur style, especially the eyes.
but your proportioning is a little..meh..off. shoulders seem too broad for girls. and body is just a bit big.
still, its pretty good.

Whipped cream facial 10-07-2007 11:35 PM

Wow. Your style is incredibly clean and colorful! I love it. <3
Btw, i think ive seen you on gaia... o_o;

Kavari 10-08-2007 07:53 AM

Nice art!
Just a little more work on your proportions, and you'll be fine.
^-^;; (sorry, to repeat it again.)

Zannrael 10-08-2007 02:11 PM

Nice work posted here. You have good coloring skills. :D

I would watch your proportions in some places though. For example, in your first piece, the girl's arm seems a bit long, though the long hair helps to disguise that fact. You may want to watch the width of a character's neck when you're drawing, too - I've noticed in some where the neck has ended up a bit too thin, thus making the rest of the body appear larger.
I really admire the way you color eyes, though - very shiny!
Keep up the good work! Hope to see more stuff soon. :D

kiitana 10-11-2007 10:36 PM

cool

Equivalent Exchange 10-11-2007 11:37 PM

The proportions are off; like their chests (not breasts, just chest in general) are huge, and their waists are tiny. Something like that? The waists are sort of undefined, but that's just me.

Amaya_Moonrain 10-12-2007 12:28 AM

not to be rude but the proportions need a little work, its either the head too big, breasts or body, and teh rest small

blueangel84 10-12-2007 03:10 AM

pretty i love them there asome! :D


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