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i M P R O V E M E N T - Comment?
Eh, I'm a little new here -pokes almost naked avatar- so I was wondering if I could some suggestions for improving my art? I was thinking of possibly opening an art shop here later on if anyone would buy ^^
Most of my samples are from Gaiaonline xD http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ndarkness2.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...vveenbust1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ysfinblack.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...nafinished.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...yebilchibi.jpg |
I have yet another sample, just finished a few minutes ago ^^
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...aifinished.jpg |
I love the things inteh corner they are pretty and give it a nice touch. I also love the teeth.
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Aww, thank you very much ^^ <333
I'm assuming you're talking about my first pic, since that's the only one with a semi-border and decorations on the corner, along with teeth, I think xD |
Your borders and backgrounds are awesome. I'm paticularly fond of the fan. The hair is a lot better in the second example, but your prortions are off. Try more shading under the nose to define it. |
Thanks, I'll try that ^^
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Thank you very much for the opinon <33
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I like it a lot... maybe work on proportions a little, but otherwise they're really good!
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i like ur style, especially the eyes.
but your proportioning is a little..meh..off. shoulders seem too broad for girls. and body is just a bit big. still, its pretty good. |
Wow. Your style is incredibly clean and colorful! I love it. <3
Btw, i think ive seen you on gaia... o_o; |
Nice art!
Just a little more work on your proportions, and you'll be fine. ^-^;; (sorry, to repeat it again.) |
Nice work posted here. You have good coloring skills. :D
I would watch your proportions in some places though. For example, in your first piece, the girl's arm seems a bit long, though the long hair helps to disguise that fact. You may want to watch the width of a character's neck when you're drawing, too - I've noticed in some where the neck has ended up a bit too thin, thus making the rest of the body appear larger. I really admire the way you color eyes, though - very shiny! Keep up the good work! Hope to see more stuff soon. :D |
cool
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The proportions are off; like their chests (not breasts, just chest in general) are huge, and their waists are tiny. Something like that? The waists are sort of undefined, but that's just me.
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not to be rude but the proportions need a little work, its either the head too big, breasts or body, and teh rest small
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pretty i love them there asome! :D
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