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Kitzu 10-09-2007 07:42 AM

Random Drawings! Crit Please?
 
First offff~ Some tablet drawings. Keep in mind, I haven't used my tablet once since I started taking Life Drawing, so they really suck. xD But I think they're cute too, so please tell me what you think! (In order: Gaian AV, Bou, Raven, Gaian AV, MY Gaian AV xP)

Click the mini-pics for full size!
http://i20.tinypic.com/29m1zt5.jpghttp://i21.tinypic.com/2wgez6d.jpghttp://i23.tinypic.com/2q9iaoh.jpghttp://i21.tinypic.com/mj4t5l.jpghttp://i24.tinypic.com/9awg2e.jpg

And then a traditional piece I whipped up just a few minutes ago specifically for this post. xD It's based on an image of myself, this one! Here goes!

I hope it's not to bad! BTW, It's just a bunch of pics of the same image, not all of them had great quality in all areas. xD

Preview: http://i24.tinypic.com/9qljic.jpg
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Please c+c, especially on the last one! I really want to improve my traditional! <3 Thank youuuu~

Equivalent Exchange 10-10-2007 04:17 AM

Her lip isn't supposed to be that high, er, the excess shading on her chin makes it look like she's puffing up her cheeks. Overall, I think you did pretty well. I especially like the eye.

Kitzu 10-10-2007 04:39 AM

Thank you so much! It was an awkward angle to portray and I failed, but I will persevere! *covers the cleavage-ness with her hand*

That chin shadow is rather heavy now that I really look at it....Ah well, more chin and lip work for me! Thank you so much! <333

Alicia 10-10-2007 07:19 AM

  • One thing that can help with drawing faces is to figure out the proportions first in blocks. It helps a lot in not making certain parts too small and such.

    As for your pencil technique, I doubt I could do better myself. I am 100% the digital artist. xD

Caeluma 10-10-2007 10:44 PM

I like the grey skin and purple haired one. I really like your choice of colour on it.


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