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shaggmaster 10-10-2007 04:30 PM

tell me how im doing
 
ok I just got done with some avi art. how does it look. they took about 5 minutes each so yea.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...07111851AM.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...07111622AM.jpg

please tell me how they look and how much you would pay for me to do one of you.

Jenn_heart 10-10-2007 08:09 PM

not too bad.
i like your drawing style, and the details are really nice, but i think you could work on proportions a bit more.
for example, in the first picture, the head is too big compared to the body, and the arms are a bit skinny.
but it's not bad. keep trying!

Avvy 10-10-2007 09:21 PM

I think you should take more time on your pieces. Make sure your lines are one line and your not somewhat stitching lines (if that makes sense). Try shading or coloring your art and it will make it a lot better and pop out. Also, try taking time to study human anatomy and how out bodies work. It helps a lot when trying to draw the human figure whether its anime or realism. Oh, and by the way, good job and keep it up~ ^-^

Caeluma 10-10-2007 10:43 PM

they are pretty good but maybe you should spend more then 5 minutes on them.

shaggmaster 10-11-2007 03:44 AM

thanks guys.. for the constructive critisim

@calcium- lol yea maybe.. but then I try to make everything perfect and end up ereasing through the paper lol.

Equivalent Exchange 10-11-2007 11:31 PM

I'm going to assume that these are chibis, so I won't say too much about the proportion, but the anatomy is waaay off. >_>


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