the begining of a book the first chapter
 

CHAPTER 1.
The Ninja Princess Kimono
By Andreea Ariana Marcu
It was an usually day in The Mountain Land. The queen is with her doughter, Kimono to view the mountains. Her daughter is a simple girl, crative, very kind and very brave, but her mother is elegant, shy, very polite and a serious woman. Kimono loved her mother, but her dad lived in another village very far from The Mountain Land.The girl has lots of friends, but many people hated her and wanted to kill her, because of shes beauty and kindness. She plays a lot with her friends, without her mother to know.
One day the queen takes a look at the garden, where her daughter supouse to be. She sees her playing with some girls. She brings Kimono in the palace and puts her in front of a mirror. She dresses Kimono in a long red dress embroideried wirh white roses. She takes her hair, makes a pony tail from it and then she puts the tail in a loob hair. Her hair is black like the night and bright like the stars. Her loob of hair is interlacing with white and orange roses. The queen takes her crown and put it on the princess head. Then she tells Kimono ” My dear doughter, you are very young, I know that you are 12, but now you will look like a real princess!” Then she takes the princess and brings her to their balcony. She showes Kimono the Mountain land, the grass, the mountains, the people and then takes a look at the little girl and begins to explain ” Look! Our land is big and beautiful and will get better and better for now on. Think of it like a little plan, which rises from the ground and then it transformes into a big and beautiful flower. The grass near the mountains are like spring and winter...” the girl is confused how could the grass and the mountains like spring and winter and the mother explains ”Springs is beautiful like the sun and winter cold like the moon, which stays behind the sun. And look at the people who live on our land, which work hard to have a better place in this world... And finally look at you, a simple girl, the no one could tell that you are a princess. They will debend on you!” Her mother right hand is shaking and the girl gets a little scared. In a moment the queen s hand stops shaking and begins with a serious voice ” For now on you will behave like a princess!!” The girl is shoked , she begins to cry with some cristal jewels , that was just one of her powers. She did not realize her power, but her mother did, the queen wants to tell kimono about her powers next week when she will be 13. Still Kimono asks her mom ” What?? What u want to tell me with that?” her mom is a little upset but she wil tell her ” Donțt be surprised, you are the only one who can do it. For now on no games or friends and no I said no telephone calls. I will tell you more later now go to sleep.” At the queen words Kimono goes up stears, All the ninght she could not sleep, she is devastated . With no friends and a lot of rules. She thinks ”What can I do?” It passed 2 hours and she has an idee ” My friends told me about a certain person named ninja, a ninja is a brave fighter, worth to be called a leader. Now I know I want to be a ninja, not an usually ninja, a princess ninja, which will fight with who will attack The Mountain Land!”
Next day is an usually one...
In the evening


I did not finish the chapter, i need to translate it into english so it will take me some time

lovely, :) Keep up the good work, but I would say try and write it with some space in between sections...or something because it's kind of hard to read when it's all crammed together.