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yes im writting a book called The True Diary Of A Cat
Chapter 1
Today is day one i have been released from the pound to an owner,she loves on me too much so i will conduct a plan to escape from her.I tried going threw the doggy door but i failed my owner had caught me and nailed up the doggy door.Then I Tried Tripping Her It Worked Then I Tried Escaping Threw The Backdoor She Came out Of But She Grabbed My Tail And Said "Its Alright I Know It Was An Accedent" What Is It Going To Take To Escape Her love.Then While She Was Sleeping I tried Going Threw The Window But I Made Too Much Noise And Woke Her up and she shut all the windows and put me in the bathroom with food and water in the bathroom for the night,then i tried escaping threw that window but sadly i failed it was locked and now i have no chance but then i conducted another plan i scratched the door so much she came in and said be quiet then at that moment i escaped the bathroom then i saw another window open i headed for it but she saw i was not there and ran to me but i got away so fast i hid and she didnt find me but then she did so i ran and she ran after me and caught me and stuck me in the bathroom til morning i slept only 8 hours that night i was going to be very tired in the morning for sure i was thinking of ways to escape but then my eyes slowly shut and went closer and closer together then i was a sleep before my very eyes.
Chapter 2
Today is day two i have conducted yet another plan to escape i will run out the door when my owner goes for her morning run around the block and then i will be free for once so she has awoken and got dressed ate breakfast then she opened the door i hid by the door and then she opened i ran she stepped on my tail and relized i was about to run out the door so she decided to stay and keep watch of me so i do not try to escape again.so i did not fall asleep she did she i decided to jump on her from the tv she awoke and fell backwards i thought it was pretty funny.

EDIT: I forgot what forum I was on. THIS SHOULD NOT BE IN THIS FORUM. Place it in literature spot!!!

Taking into account the level of writing of a cat, (jk) I still found a lot of errors that are really bad on the eyes.

There are a lot of errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization, and more.

You shouldn't start each entry with "Today is day #..."
And there isn't enough depth of why the cat is escaping and developing of a personality for both the cat and the owner. Also, the title is really bland.

You really should go through it and edit before posting this up.

Is it a children's book? If not, you might want to make the chapters longer.

I think you need to slow down a bit, elaborate, and most of all- build character! Right now, the writing is very bland. There are also grammar, capitalization errors, and the paragraphs are not correctly split.