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The living book 10-27-2007 02:55 PM

A new kind of Goth. <33
 
Waiting over blighted apparition
Like babies sleeping...
Constant rehabilitation
As the medicine starts seeping...

Imagination creeping...
Wandering specters dimming
As love cast it's reaping...
While the gallantry stays pompous

For now I lay down and weep
As the baby starts peeping...
Letting go of my distorts
That my brain is keeping...

yar im pocky 10-30-2007 11:19 AM

:D I like it.

iViolent 12-07-2007 10:54 PM


Its good except when you really read it over,
Its many thoughts put together and really has no theme/point.



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