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Lady Jaime's Poetry
I'm an aspiring writer as well poet by nature. Most of my poems are related to people that I known, compaaring their behavior and personalit alike with nature itself.
I would appreciate feedback if possible. Most of these poems are dedicated to another person so they're copyrighted under my real name. Im going to post two poems - the first one is dedicated to my former best friend and the second one is dedicated to my mother's sister (my aunt) which was read at her wedding. |
Nature of Friendship
Dedicated to Kelly Boyd How did I hear thy name... When the wind blows or the pond rippling all around probably the soft breeze near the ocean Yet I were never near them both... But I could hear thy name all around me As I approaches a soft-smelling rose... I could smell you; Yet hear your name I wonder why could I... It is the nature surrouding whispering your name so quietly and serene That I could feel the words passing through my soul I approach a willow tree & sat underneath it listening to Mother Nature's sounds... Your name is very sweet as morning dew touches the First petal I find it very lonesome without thee My heart was whispering thy's name... To the wind like a soft rose standing beautifully under the sunshine |
A Couple's Love
Dedicated to my Aunt Diane and her Husband Bobby Across the dewy grass Through the breezy air A love came in a pair From a man of sensitivity A woman of elegant praise Through the time of love and age We will dance this age-old match And be known as the World's Greatest Couple In our families' hearts |
You guys can post now if you wish ^-^
If possible, I would like positive feedback instead of the negative but I know Im asking for too much. |
I liek them, the first one more-so,
they're better than mine, lawl |
Thanks ^^
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