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Adderly 11-09-2007 06:27 AM

Edmund's Gingerbread House
 
Just something I did for class. I got 10/10 for some reason but it's the only poem in my life I've ever done.

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So the voice in my head
says “It’s just like before.”

And the voice in my head
says “Don’t open the door.”

But my heart says “Go on.
He’s waiting for you.”

“This time he’s changed.
It’s like he’s brand new.”

My body disagrees.
“He’ll do it again.”

It recoiles with fear.
“It’s just a matter of when.”

“The heart is all wrong.”
My soul wisely sings.

I fly far away,
with my new set of wings.

iViolent 12-07-2007 11:38 PM


It is very good.
It also has a nice, clear theme.


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