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Art cree-teek, s'il vous plaît?
I'm not particularly good, and the lack of scanner is even more limiting. Even so - anyone so kind as to give me a few pointers and such on what's good and bad in these?
Note: All are sketches, and several are unfinished. *sheepish* http://i19.tinypic.com/6jfqqdz.jpg No right arm syndrome + camera blur = fail. http://i5.tinypic.com/72tj2gk.jpg Okay, here I can tell that her arms and hands are too small for her body. And her hair looked better on paper. *sulks* http://i8.tinypic.com/82bhlea.jpg Wow. This is quite old. Anyway, the profile is obviously a bit screwed-up, so I think this picture's greatest merit is the shading. :( http://i15.tinypic.com/8bt4vo6.jpg Hee-hee. This was just a little bit different. The figure is deformed - so any tips on making all the limbs deformed in the same way? http://i2.tinypic.com/815tabb.jpg No right arm syndrome strikes again! I think his body's too slight for his head. http://i5.tinypic.com/8a0vl95.jpg And this was just a little practice at recreating characters, perspective and posing. Any con-crit welcomed! :D |
Well...
i was never good at this stuff... but practising makes perfect. o 3o work on:: the body sizes of each body part. xD the postures. You have good potential though. keep eet uup. n.n |
The first pic:
I don't know if the hair on her head is suppose to be like that. The hair looks puffy on the head. Second one: Yeah, exactly what I think but don't you find the head a little to big for her body too? And I don't know what to say for the others. In general you have a special style. <3 |
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