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A few Poems I wrote
Honestly
By: Honestly, truly, completely hurt poet-girl To be honest I don’t know anymore I said I loved you, More than once. You’ve said the same to me, Do you mean it? Honestly, truly, completely Do you love me? You love her to, More than me. So why don’t you forget me? Stop playing games with my heart How do you live with yourself? Everyday, you lie to me “I love you” Yeah right, “Well I hate you” Have fun alone With her Let me rest in piece I don’t need you anymore To be honest I know now I said I loved you I now take it all back I hate you Go away, from me Love her, do it honestly Love her more than me, honestly, truly, completely I don’t need you anymore Leave me alone This is my goodbye, to you I bid five more words Forget me, honestly, completely, forever The Real Me By: Honestly, truly, completely hurt poet-girl Open your eyes Look inside Find the real me Am I what you want? Are you alone In this world? Look for me I’ll comfort you Look inside me Am I what you wish I’d be? I hope I am Look for the real me My smile is a mask, My emotions in a tilted bottle I’m unstable Look for the real me Are you real? Am I real Are they real? No, it’s all a lie We do not exist We are but a dream Fake, in god’s eyes A mistake Are you real? Yes Am I real? No I’m the mistake. I’m fake. Still but a dream to be made real Still to be found is the real me. UNIQUE By: Honestly, truly, completely hurt poet-girl They laugh at me A sharp pain when they say I'm plain "I'm just like everyone else" But I'm not, I'm different. Like a rare shell on a beach I'm different, unique. Like a rushing river in a dessert I can save lives if I wanted to. I'm creative not plain My imagination un-slain I'm not like everyone else, With opinions as much their own sun. My attitude sharp like a scolding voice I'm as my own as my name; completely mine. So, no I'm different, Not like anyone else. Strike down those who don't believe 'Cause as I've said I'm as my own as my name so totally and completely my own WHY? You steal my heart, Make me feel loved Then tear it up into pieces I’ve cried my last My tears were for you, You made me cry So rot in hell I hate you Why do you haunt me? Why do I love you? Why do you lie to me? Why does god hate me? I hate you Don’t I? Get away from me I hate you, I know I do. So why can't I get over you? You intoxicate me To no end Like a plague I can't get over you. |
I am not oppose to negative writings, but when they're just thoughts put together, that doesn't make things the best. In your poems you want to express your feelings, but you should make sure it explains everyone. Like..how you feel, why you feel it, what makes you feel it, how you react, etc. Also, I wouldn't use so many of the same words, try getting out a thesaurus and seeing other words with that meaning. Still, great job, you have talent. |
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