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Majinkoz 12-07-2007 06:25 PM

Rate My Avi! <3 [NEW AVI]
 
Okay! I finally finished a new avi, and I really would love to know what you think. I personally like black, gold and red together. But it may be over done...I don't think so...w/e. I'm a confused person. XD So tell me what you think! <3

Constructive criticism is welcome. :)

If there are any specific items that you think would go well with my avi tell me what they are, and where to find them! <333

Thank you very much! <333

fuyumi_saito 12-07-2007 06:53 PM

It's cute, but very cluttery. I give it a 9/10 though, because I do like it. Maybe minus the star or the cloak to get rid of some of the clutter, but it's fine as it is. ^^

twizted child eve 12-07-2007 09:28 PM

The cloak is hard to match. I think it needs different pants, more brown and more gold to match the halo. Also maybe take off the cat ears/tail? 7/10.

Divine_lil_brat 12-08-2007 03:31 AM

I flat out don't like it. I would suggest trying a different thing, and maybe different colors with the cloak. Nothing really matches, well the yellows do but thats about it. I think it was a nice attempt but try again. Maybe pink instead of the yellow to help match the cloak, and different pants. 5/10....

mewmew07 12-08-2007 09:51 AM

It's ok, though it's sort of cluttery. Get rid of the fireflies or the halo. One or the other, not both. I give your avatar a 5/10.

iClimax 12-08-2007 06:01 PM

Nice avatar! I love it, it is pretty good for the colors that you used. But the cloak doesn't match too well, sorry ^.^ Lol but the truth hurts. (Not that bad this time though, I hope! ) Maybe you should add a bit more red for the cloak to math? But don't worry my avatar is not any where near as good as any one elses avatars on here. Lol I is nakey! <3
7/10

vmars 12-08-2007 09:57 PM

I like the cat ears and it matches the picture on the shirt, but the bee shoes do not really fit. They are yellow and black, but other than that. Maybe if the shoes were black it would make the outfit seem less cluttered. The chick is cute.

my pathetic world 12-10-2007 05:21 AM

i think u should add a lil more green,to match with the cloak.

woopdidoodoo 12-10-2007 07:42 AM

Hiya Maji I hope you don't
mind me dropping by. I like the
color combo very much but the avi
is very cluttered and doesn't have
much of an actual theme so it looks
a bit out of place to me. I think though
if you used the colors in clothing items
instead of other items it might work better.
I do give you an 8 out of 10 though coz
the colors work so well togeher without
overdoing it.

Majinkoz 12-11-2007 08:32 PM

Wow, I didn't think it was that bad! lol...I actually kind of liked it. >.<

But I appreciate all of the constructive criticism...now what about the avi that I just did now...it's my all yellow avi, what does everyone think of that?

fuyumi_saito 12-11-2007 08:41 PM

Hmm.. it's simple and cute. It's a good start. Hopefully they'll get some more white glove and different colored belts in the future.

Majinkoz 12-11-2007 09:20 PM

OoO yeah I think a belt would actually look good with this avi, but everyone thought my other one was way to cluttered...which I actually didn't think so...

Anyways, because they thought it was cluttered I decided to do something simple with not very many items.

minty_mango 12-11-2007 11:40 PM

3/10 Too yellow O___o it blinds me!

Majinkoz 12-12-2007 02:21 AM

^^ I like bright happy avis...sometimes those black/brown/gray avis are kind of boring. But thanks mango.

Cherry Who? 12-12-2007 04:15 AM

Hmm, how about a panda scarf, a black belt of one kind or another (plain, chained, doubled, doesn't matter), and maybe a white lantern? I also feel like it needs a hairpin, but I'm not sure of which one would work best.
It's a good start. ^^
And sorry, but I don't do rates. I'm bad at them. XD

Majinkoz 12-12-2007 04:32 AM

haha well thank you Cherry, you actually helped me a lot! <33

I wanted some suggestions beacuse I know it's not the best and you gave me exactly what I'm looking for...this is only a temp. avi anyways until I can finish a quest or two of mine....well three....*ponders*

Anyways, thanks. :) I always see your avi's around and I love them.

Cherry Who? 12-12-2007 06:10 PM

Ooh, good luck on your quests! Do you have any dream avis? Or is it just quests for a few expensive items with no outfit in mind yet? Cause I'd love to give some suggestions and tips if you've got a dream avi. ^^

Aww, thanks! ^^ This one's not finished yet, though. When it's done, it's going to look like this.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9...leblacksb1.png
It's just a matter of finding people who are selling the items I need.

Sasori3 12-13-2007 09:26 PM

I think your avi's awesome for what it's worth hehehehe :P :P :P

nescia 12-13-2007 10:01 PM

I think that black EGL sleeves and the silver moon necklace would look nice with it.

Majinkoz 12-14-2007 12:28 AM

@cherry, I don't think I have a specific avi idea in mind, I'm just trying to get a pudao and one of the crowns, then I kind of want to build a purple and gold themed avi...I'm really bad with making avis and colors though, so please if you have any suggestions let me know! <33

I hope that one day I can make admins pick...but idk.

Oh and I love the teal, it's such a pretty color.

@nescia thanks!! <33

Cherry Who? 12-14-2007 03:04 AM

Yeah, that's where the MAC comes in handy. You can try a bunch of different things without forking over any gold.
I'd say just try that for a bit, and keep trying until you get it just how you like. ^^ Or, if you'd like, I can try to make an avatar for you using the crown and pudao.
I'm sure you can! ^^ I did, and I had only been here for a month! ^^
Thanks! I love it too. I just wish there were more of it. The bubbly summer set and this top are really the ONLY items in this color. D:

Majinkoz 12-14-2007 06:21 PM

I don't want to put you out, but I would love for your to make me a gold and purple avi! >.<

I'm bad at it lol, and what is MAC is that the menewsha avi creator? Probably lol...it didn't work when I downloaded it. D:

A i 12-22-2007 11:14 AM

i think the the legcoolers is a little bit too outstanding..but perhaps its just me ^^
overall, i give u an 8 over 10, its cute =D

Majinkoz 12-23-2007 07:00 AM

OoOO I just got a big gown. <3

Birdy 12-23-2007 08:24 AM

Aah it's so cute and puffy. Haha.


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