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The Wandering Poet 01-23-2008 09:01 PM

okay... maybe I can get it before admin's pick on monday xD

Divine_lil_brat 01-23-2008 09:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
okay... maybe I can get it before admin's pick on monday xD

Yup, that would be nice ^^

The Wandering Poet 01-23-2008 09:32 PM

Yup... then I can spend 6 months preparing for the next one I can enter xD and I know who I'll go to for advice =3

Divine_lil_brat 01-23-2008 09:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Yup... then I can spend 6 months preparing for the next one I can enter xD and I know who I'll go to for advice =3

lol 6 months? thats a long time... why so long?

The Wandering Poet 01-23-2008 09:41 PM

You can only win once every 6 months

Divine_lil_brat 01-23-2008 09:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
You can only win once every 6 months


Oh, I had no idea XD I guess I should but I never bother to ask about it.

Titenya 01-23-2008 09:52 PM

I love my new avi, but I know it's not admin's pick worthey... I just wish we had some better hand held items to go with it. *is cosplaying right now*

Divine_lil_brat 01-23-2008 09:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Phedre
I love my new avi, but I know it's not admin's pick worthey... I just wish we had some better hand held items to go with it. *is cosplaying right now*

What are you cosplaying? I might be able to help ^^

Ti 01-23-2008 11:32 PM

Tonks from Harry potter ^_^ the look is prety much downpat, and the hair is perfect. it's just the limitations of the items avalable on mene right now *nods* but it's a lot better than when I tried to make her on gaia... it's the hair... it's just perfect

Divine_lil_brat 01-23-2008 11:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Captin Morgan
Tonks from Harry potter ^_^ the look is prety much downpat, and the hair is perfect. it's just the limitations of the items avalable on mene right now *nods* but it's a lot better than when I tried to make her on gaia... it's the hair... it's just perfect

Lol whos tonks? got a ref. pic? I don't think I've ever seen her...

Gaia has a lot of hairstyle to choose from, I do a lot of cosplay on gaia when I can ^^

Titenya 01-24-2008 12:00 AM

i got two in my ac thread...

x x x

And i tried on gaia, and didn't find any hair styles that work for the look, if you look at the second one it's almost an exact replica of unisex 5 (what i have on) and i like the pink, it's a nice contrast to the dark avi, and fits the charactor.

edit - found a full length, though not very good one ... but that shows the shoes

Divine_lil_brat 01-24-2008 12:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Phedre
i got two in my ac thread...

x x

And i tried on gaia, and didn't find any hair styles that work for the look, if you look at the second one it's almost an exact replica of unisex 5 (what i have on) and i like the pink, it's a nice contrast to the dark avi, and fits the charactor.

0.o wow it looks like her for the most part, maybe different pants. But the hair seems to be spot on, even the shade.

But you couldn't anything on gaia at all to work?

Titenya 01-24-2008 12:07 AM

not for that hair style.. closet thing was hunter, but the color was so off... and i know i should have diffrent pants... but i'm attached to my pinup set.. i ahvn't taken them off since i baught them lol And i know a longer coat would be better, but as this is the only black coat for girls i guess i'll have to stay with it, i kinda do like it though, it adds a little gray which makes it less dark, and is a nice contrast to all the black.

I posted a 3rd picture as a referance for the boots.

Divine_lil_brat 01-24-2008 12:12 AM

Over all its a good cosplay for what items you had to use. Specifically on mene when its so new and limited on items.

I'm surprised gaia didn't have anything to go with. I'm currently working on a cosplay for gaia right now and I just missing a few key items.

Foxxi 01-24-2008 12:33 AM

Mind sharing your opinion on my avi?^___________^

The Wandering Poet 01-24-2008 06:12 AM

Hey divine, this the hand-held item you meant? *holds up fan*

Divine_lil_brat 01-25-2008 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Mind sharing your opinion on my avi?^___________^


Nice choice in colors as well as scheme. I would suggest a pair of white/black/gold gloves to help bring white/black to the arms. The eye flow is head to toe and the colors flow from the head down to the rest of the avi. So gloves at this point would be great to help tie in all the colors through out the avi. Maybe a lil more black on the head would be good, maybe ear muffs?

8/10 plain but well together. ^^


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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Hey divine, this the hand-held item you meant? *holds up fan*


Very cute, but now you need a lil purple to tie the fan into the rest of the avi. Uhm maybe purple stocking, glove,necklace, belt... Uhm I would suggest using the avi creator to what you think of adding purple to this avi. It would have to be big changes, just splashes here and there.

Love the fan though very cute ^^

Iro 01-25-2008 12:50 PM

Hello, Divine! My avatar is almost complete, but something still seems lacking. Would you be so kind as to give your opinions on my avatar please? Thank you! ^^

The Wandering Poet 01-26-2008 08:58 AM

Umm... oh... you think maybe the Fan of light would fit?

Will add pic soon ^^

Edit - The image thing you have up isn't working for me right now, I'll try later >.<

Divine_lil_brat 01-28-2008 10:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Ironic_Depressions
Hello, Divine! My avatar is almost complete, but something still seems lacking. Would you be so kind as to give your opinions on my avatar please? Thank you! ^^


Well you need more red at the bottom. The red seems to stop with the fire flies and the red chain hanging from the jacket. The bottom (feet) has no red at all and that makes the top look alil red heavy. To many different shades of black....I would loose the cloak, it so far is the biggest shade of black that doesn't match, just a suggestion you don't have to ^^

Try going a skin shade darker and that could be whats throwing everything off. I could go on with what doesn't seem to go and so on but if I remember correct you were basing this avi around the crown, no?

At this point, I would try darking the skin tone, that might help, like a lot. Uhm as for bring more red to the bottom, I would suggest maybe a pair of short pants with red socks, or -thinks- something like that.

Sorry I can't think of any other way to brin red to the feet without changing the shoes. But I like the shoes you already have, they go well with this avi.

8/10 needs to be more balanced with the colors and shades. Otherwise its starting to shape up ^^


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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Umm... oh... you think maybe the Fan of light would fit?

Will add pic soon ^^

Edit - The image thing you have up isn't working for me right now, I'll try later >.<


Its okay, Kaze just use whatever hosting site you like ^^ I'm no longer blocked ^^

Iro 01-29-2008 04:13 AM

Thank you very much for the suggestions, Divine! I'll try them out and see what I could get. ^_^

Divine_lil_brat 01-29-2008 07:23 AM

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Originally Posted by Ironic_Depressions
Thank you very much for the suggestions, Divine! I'll try them out and see what I could get. ^_^

Sure thing, I hope the suggestions work for you. If you have any more questions, feel free to come back ^^

Abis 01-29-2008 07:31 AM

Hey Divine, been a while. XD

Was just wondering if you had any suggestions for my avvy.
(Aside from getting some miracle-hair growth).
I'm probably going to add the purple armband from the Moonlit set, and maybe some blue or purple fishnets...

And, thanks for the rating.
Love the way you've tied in the hairpin's colors.

Divine_lil_brat 01-29-2008 07:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Abis
Hey Divine, been a while. XD

Was just wondering if you had any suggestions for my avvy.
(Aside from getting some miracle-hair growth).
I'm probably going to add the purple armband from the Moonlit set, and maybe some blue or purple fishnets...

And, thanks for the rating.
Love the way you've tied in the hairpin's colors.


'ello Abis ^^

This is so random, I just rated you in the rate above thread XD But I love to give you some of my thoughts and suggestions ^^

Well I love the color combo and how you layered things. I like the use of the items and love the mask. I wish you had hair but we all know that is impossible as of right now. I think an arm band would be a great idea seeing how the arms are a lil plain. I think the blue fishnets would be to dark as would be the purple ones. I think with this avi, you could leave the legs bare so to say and it wouldn't hinder it at all.

I think some earings would be nice and possible a head items to try and help cover the baldness. Maybe the purple or blue flower or even the winters night bonnet, could work to help cover the baldness.


Over all I like it and thinks very pretty, 8.5/10 I love to see a few more items on it.

Thanks, I've been working on this avi forever now >.< and every time I think I have it right, I find something wrong with XD

Abis 01-29-2008 05:22 PM

I was looking at the Heaven earrings as a possibility.
I'm actually wearing the silver cross ones right now, but they don't show without hair behind them. XD

I'll probably wind up using either the purple temptress hairpin or that new purple one (the one from the new set, I cant' remember the names).

Hooray for saving up again.
XD


Oh. Can you think of any gloves that would work better than the bracelets?
I've looked at the Heaven ones, but didn't like the black, and the winter ones didn't seem to fit right...


And. Yeah, I tried to make an avvy around the hairpin once. Drove me insane, so I gave up.


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