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Divine_lil_brat 01-30-2008 12:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Abis
I was looking at the Heaven earrings as a possibility.
I'm actually wearing the silver cross ones right now, but they don't show without hair behind them. XD

I'll probably wind up using either the purple temptress hairpin or that new purple one (the one from the new set, I cant' remember the names).

Hooray for saving up again.
XD


Oh. Can you think of any gloves that would work better than the bracelets?
I've looked at the Heaven ones, but didn't like the black, and the winter ones didn't seem to fit right...


And. Yeah, I tried to make an avvy around the hairpin once. Drove me insane, so I gave up.




Uhm glove wise? hhmmm let me see :

Purple Leather Gloves
Snowy Leather Gloves
Aqua Leather Gloves
Sweet Witch Gloves

I think any of those could work ^^ As for the hairpin, maybe..I'd have to see a pic of to know which on it is lol

Yeah, I'm slowly going insane..

but I love this hairpin. I mac it and got everything for it and was all excited. Then People were saying oh this doesn't match, or the brown over powers it >.< So now I'm just trying to even things out and make it all pretty and so on. Its a hard job, but somebody has to do it ^^

Majinkoz 01-30-2008 01:10 AM

I had an avi kind of like this a little bit ago, but I made a few changes and I personally like this better, what do you think?

Divine_lil_brat 01-30-2008 05:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Majinkoz
I had an avi kind of like this a little bit ago, but I made a few changes and I personally like this better, what do you think?

Its different, kinda. I like the colors you chose to use. I like how the flow is head to toe and the colors seem to go through out the avi. My biggest suggestion a this point would be a pair of shoes and gloves. The arms are bare and gloves would help bring in some more color to the avi. I think dark blue to match your hair and bra, it would help bring the color more into the avi. Shoe wise I would suggest dark blue as well, to bring the dark blue from the head of the down to the base.

8/10 its cluttered cute but you need more dark blue on the avi to make the colors even. SO dark blue gloves and shoes would be a good add.

Iro 01-30-2008 10:35 AM

Now there's a slight green on the jacket. xD

But does the bottom look a little better now?
It's a pity the shoes overlap the leg warmers. ^_^

Abis 01-30-2008 09:58 PM

So, minor problem. The armband removes the bracelets.

I can't think of anything else to help the arms, though. Any thoughts?

Divine_lil_brat 01-30-2008 11:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Ironic_Depressions
Now there's a slight green on the jacket. xD

But does the bottom look a little better now?
It's a pity the shoes overlap the leg warmers. ^_^

I like it, but now theres the green to deal with. Try adding the cloak again. It may work better now because the black of the pants is no longer there.

hhhmmm, give me a minute or two to think it over...

Edit: Can you wear the pants you had on before with the leg warmers?


Quote:

Originally Posted by Abis
So, minor problem. The armband removes the bracelets.

I can't think of anything else to help the arms, though. Any thoughts?

Purple Leather Gloves
Snowy Leather Gloves
Aqua Leather Gloves
Sweet Witch Gloves

those could work.

Edit: I mac you avi and so far the Sweet witch gloves look the best. Have you thought about adding birds or snow flakes to your avi. You should mac and take a look at it with birds, its cute lol XD

The Wandering Poet 01-31-2008 02:11 AM

Hey divine, I'm thinking since my avi IS red I might just wait until Valentine's Day and hope a hand held item comes out that matches my avi ^^

Divine_lil_brat 01-31-2008 02:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Hey divine, I'm thinking since my avi IS red I might just wait until Valentine's Day and hope a hand held item comes out that matches my avi ^^

Thats a good idea ^^ and seeing how its just around the corner, it won't be to long of a wait. Who knows it could be that some extra to make your avi Super amazingly awesome XD

Eserel 01-31-2008 02:20 AM

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People in the Rate the Avvie above you didn't give me suggestions.
And I don't want to post again.
XP

I haz dillema with the lower part of my avvie.
Haaaaaalp ploxxxx.
D:

The Wandering Poet 01-31-2008 02:21 AM

I hope nobody copies my avi by then >.< or I'll definitely not get Admin's pick :(

How long is it until then you think?

Divine_lil_brat 01-31-2008 02:39 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
I hope nobody copies my avi by then >.< or I'll definitely not get Admin's pick :(

How long is it until then you think?

Roughly 2 weeks until then.

As for your avi, I don't think anyone will copy you ^^ you should be safe.

Mozzetti 01-31-2008 02:56 AM


- HAIR IS BACK! XD -

Hey Divine. ^^; How about a rate on this?

It's kind of a build-off of one of my past avatars, but I think better. Not everything matches perfect, but I think it has a nice flow.

Iro 01-31-2008 04:08 AM

Thank you, Divine!
And I actually think the cloak doesn't look as well with the shorts. See? *points at avatar* ~_^

And the long pants overlap the leg warmers, rather unfortunately. I have tried that one out when I first got the leg warmers. Only a slight red and gold poking out on the left. Pity. xD

Divine_lil_brat 01-31-2008 10:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

- HAIR IS BACK! XD -

Hey Divine. ^^; How about a rate on this?

It's kind of a build-off of one of my past avatars, but I think better. Not everything matches perfect, but I think it has a nice flow.


Yay for hair ^^ I love it, the hair really pulls it together and completes the look. I see what you mean about not everything matches but its an awesome avi. Maybe a different skirt? Maybe a darker one with gold on it?

9.5/10 I love the randomness of the avi and all the colors. I like the way things are layered. Could be a ten but the skirt seem really off, maybe more purple on the head?

Congrats on the hair and making to my front page XD



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Originally Posted by Ironic_Depressions
Thank you, Divine!
And I actually think the cloak doesn't look as well with the shorts. See? *points at avatar* ~_^

And the long pants overlap the leg warmers, rather unfortunately. I have tried that one out when I first got the leg warmers. Only a slight red and gold poking out on the left. Pity. xD


Darn, the pants with the leg warmers would be awesome >.< The cloak doesn't look bad but it doesn't look that great either..... -sighs- but if you don't have the cloak on, you see the green then you have to add green to your avi to complete. -pouts- so close, yet so far >.< let me try mac again and see what I come up with ^^

katyasha 01-31-2008 10:22 PM

It will be awhile until I get some cloths to show off.

Divine_lil_brat 01-31-2008 10:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Eserel
]:
People in the Rate the Avvie above you didn't give me suggestions.
And I don't want to post again.
XP

I haz dillema with the lower part of my avvie.
Haaaaaalp ploxxxx.
D:


OH my gosh, I'm so sorry. I didn't even see your post until right now. I'm sorry, let get on your avi right away ^^

Well for starters I like the color combo and use of items. The flow is head to toe and the colors are through out the avi. I would suggest bringing some of the blue to the bottom of the avi (the feet). The blue seems to stop at the knees. Maybe an anklet of sorts?

Edit: Or blue stockings with pink shoes?

Sakura_Madison 01-31-2008 11:36 PM

I would like to have a Critiquing please?

The colors go from lightest to darkest, starting from head to toe.

Karine 01-31-2008 11:48 PM

i'd like a rating please. C:

Divine_lil_brat 02-01-2008 12:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Sakura_Madison
I would like to have a Critiquing please?

The colors go from lightest to darkest, starting from head to toe.

Very interesting combo ^^ Well I like how you went from light to dark on the avi. I don't care for the scarf, it light in one sense but dark in another. It could go either way but in this sense is darker than the mask...
I think a pair of green gloves would be a good idea and maybe a different necklace, something that stands out maybe a green neck tie?

Over all very unique 8/10 just needs some fine tuning.



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Originally Posted by Karine
i'd like a rating please. C:


Of course ^^

Cute, The flow is head to toe and the colors flow through out the avi. Though the red seems to stop at the knees. The only real issue I see with it would be the cream color of the cake is no where else in the avi. so at this point I would add red gloves, try to add some red about the feet and try to add some cream color items, or not. Its only a suggestions though ^^

Over all 8/10 nice choice of colors ^^

Karine 02-01-2008 01:02 AM

i was thinking the same things. xD
Thank very much though. C:~ -goes to edit with m.a.c-

Divine_lil_brat 02-01-2008 01:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Karine
i was thinking the same things. xD
Thank very much though. C:~ -goes to edit with m.a.c-

Good Luck ^^

Iro 02-01-2008 12:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
Darn, the pants with the leg warmers would be awesome >.< The cloak doesn't look bad but it doesn't look that great either..... -sighs- but if you don't have the cloak on, you see the green then you have to add green to your avi to complete. -pouts- so close, yet so far >.< let me try mac again and see what I come up with ^^

lol Yes. That is why. If the leg warmers overlapped the pants, it would have looked really great. xD

Hmm... I suppose I shall have to wait for the VDay event and see what they offer?
Thanks for your help! ^_^

Kyoko Otonashi 02-01-2008 02:05 PM

I would quite like a rating too please *bow*

Korrye 02-01-2008 02:28 PM

Hey there Divine. I was wondering about my previous avatar. With the new item updates I have a lot more to work with. Do you have any suggestions as to which ones I should buy?

Captain Aamelia 02-01-2008 03:30 PM

You'll probably crush me like a bug but could I have a rate on this one, please! :wink: :P


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