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Thanks for the rate but I'm thinking about trying to get a pink, yellow, and black look. I'll be back for another rate divine!

Hey there Divine.
Just wondering what you think of this new avatar. If you're around I would appreciate the critique but if you're busy than that's okay too.
<3

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Originally Posted by nescia

I have purple witch gloves, but I didn't want to bring black into the avi.
I also had a purple t-shirt layered under the dress earlier and purple clips of chaos, but I felt like thy were too dark...
Maybe I'll put the t-shirt back on since the Artemis top isn't adding enough purple.

Thanks for the rate!
^^

EDIT-

I swapped the Artemis top for the t-shirt again.
^^

It looks better already ^^ now just to find a head item that matches better than the crown.

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Divine| Thanks. : ) I'm glad you saw my post. I thought it'd get lost- you definitely needed a thank you. and yeah. I really like my avatar, too, I just can't figure out how to get red on the bottom. It doesn't really bother me though, i love the leg coolers with the flats. xD

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Aww well thanks you ^^ I feel all warm and fuzzy inside XD

Yeah? well I like it as is, very cute and relaxed yet fun ^^

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Originally Posted by wish

thank you very much! :3 <3

Your welcome ^^

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Originally Posted by [L

ove[H]ate]Thanks for the rate but I'm thinking about trying to get a pink, yellow, and black look. I'll be back for another rate divine!

Your Welcome ^^ I think that combo would be nice and very easy to create.

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Originally Posted by Korrye

Hey there Divine.
Just wondering what you think of this new avatar. If you're around I would appreciate the critique but if you're busy than that's okay too.
<3

Very nice!! I like the combo and the layering down on this avi. The colors flow all the way through the avi and everything seems to be balanced. The green on the butterfly hairpin doesn't seem to match any of the greens in the avi, one of the new hairpins could work better.

Again another beautiful avi, another 9.5/10. Could be 10 but the hairpin throws it off and a right hand hand held would be nice to see.

Congrats on getting the front page again XD

>D
I was going for the giant big black monster gobblin up my avvie theme.
Harharhar<3

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Originally Posted by Eserel

>D
I was going for the giant big black monster gobblin up my avvie theme.
Harharhar<3

lol really? Well then well done XD

Hello there, Divine! =D
It is after the Valentine's Day event and I'm back with new items. xD

How is my current avatar?
I know it looks like it's missing some yellow/gold in the middle. I've tried the Luuuvly Golden Scarf, but it was too orange, so I took it off.

Would this look better, though?
I personally think it looks slightly off. But I would love opinions on both the one below and my current avatar. ^_^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...iroavatar3.png

Thank you very much, Divine!

Thanks so much Divine.
;_;

I'm looking into getting one of the newer hairpins. The first thing that everyone tells me is that the green is the wrong shade. Which I do agree with. xD

I still haven't found a solution for the socks, but I think I found a solution for more black on the head. -pokes new pin- Better or worse? :3

Divine| I know you said it was light and relaxed the way it is, but what do you think of it now? Do you like the purse with it?

Thank you for the opinion and the rate! :3 I've taken some of your suggestions and added gloves, and I've removed the boa so there's less black and to make the wings visible, which I'm hoping will be enough silver. If there's still a need of silver, I'll add some where I can.
I'm also hoping the white in the gloves blends in enough where I don't have to add more D: Anyway, has it gotten better, or worse? :3 I like it a lot at the moment. I just would really like your opinion of it ^-^

Okay I'm stating this quickly. I'm way tired from today so going over avis quickly seeing how I still have to do my judging for project mene. But I promise tomorrow I'll go back over the rates, though I don't think there were a lot and see if I missed anything ^^

-Divine-

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Originally Posted by Ironic_Depressions

Your Welcome ^^
Current:

Needs more white around the bottom. I might suggest changing the pants to a darker shade or to black. A white hairpin would be a good idea with the this avi to help draw the white all the way up the avi and not have it stop at the choker. A gold belt might be a good idea as well to help bring the gold through the avi as well and maybe even with another set of gloves with gold on them or a gold arm band.

over all its nice, 7/10 needs some work ^^

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Nope, don't like it. I like the colors but not some of the items you used in creating this avi. The bottom looks bare as does the skirt, not jack but shirt. If you kept the jacket and went with the skirt on your current avi and something more busy about the feet, it could be pulled together more.

6/10.

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Originally Posted by Korrye

Thanks so much Divine.
;_;

I'm looking into getting one of the newer hairpins. The first thing that everyone tells me is that the green is the wrong shade. Which I do agree with. xD

Lol yeah, well at least you see it as well and not blind to it or something like that XD

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Originally Posted by Neyor

I still haven't found a solution for the socks, but I think I found a solution for more black on the head. -pokes new pin- Better or worse? :3

I like the new hairpin (yes I saw it lol) but I think the val pin from last year looked better. How about changing out the headband for a darker one (black) or is there one?

We need more socks >.<

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Divine| I know you said it was light and relaxed the way it is, but what do you think of it now? Do you like the purse with it?

The purse is a different shade of red but not bad. Also if your going to use those gloves you might want to think about using dark shoes as well, otherwise it looks kinda random XD

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Originally Posted by JamesB14

Its gotten better and looks nicer as well as more clean. Something is still missing, maybe try adding a hand held to bring more to the bottom/ waist. I'd love to see something silver on the hat to bring the silver all the way up and mot just have it stop at the wings.

Maybe earings?

Well, I've added a silver necklace now, and they're hard to see, but I have silver earrings in. The heart ones. I'm thinking of using the silver cross earrings instead, they're easier to see. So lemme do that and tell me what you think :3

EDIT: Okay, I'm not sure if the changes are showing yet, but I have added one of those icecreams with the heart in the middle, also I've changed the hair so the earrings are now a bit more visible. I'm not sure if there's a silver head item I can add. I'll be sure to look in the MAC.

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat

I like the new hairpin (yes I saw it lol) but I think the val pin from last year looked better. How about changing out the headband for a darker one (black) or is there one?

We need more socks >.<

There is no black headband unfortunately. I suppose this is the best I can do with the current items we have. xD

Thanks again for your help. <3

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Originally Posted by JamesB14

Its a start... but the hat really needs some kind of silver/ white on it to keep the flow of those colors going head to toe not toe to neck. I'll see if theres anything I can find that could work ^^

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Originally Posted by Neyor

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat

I like the new hairpin (yes I saw it lol) but I think the val pin from last year looked better. How about changing out the headband for a darker one (black) or is there one?

We need more socks >.<

There is no black headband unfortunately. I suppose this is the best I can do with the current items we have. xD

Thanks again for your help. <3

Yeah, but it still looks nice and even if you went with the val pin from last year, it would still be rockin' XD

Your welcome, I'm here to help XD

Divine! It's been so long. o _____o;;

Can I get a rate on this attempt at using the pumpkin mask? o; Thanks ~

/refresh if I have a cloak of healing equipped?/

D:
HEI.
I NEED HALP.
I haz Dillema.
I need more black at the bottom,
But then I need more red and pink too.
I plan on getting the pink bow.
XP
I mean I love my avvie,
But yet it looks so wrong.

EDIT;;
Gonna be screwing around with my avvie again.
>D
I WENT SMART THIS TIME AND UPLOADED IT FOR YOU.
XDDD

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...a/Picture3.png

I'm sorry if I'm posting in here too much D: But someone recommended I change my hair to silver. What do you think? Does that do it? Or should I change it back red? :/ I kind of like it. It also makes the heart icecream stand out more.

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I second the silver suggestion.
That would look killer cool.

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Divine! It's been so long. o _____o;;

Can I get a rate on this attempt at using the pumpkin mask? o; Thanks ~

/refresh if I have a cloak of healing equipped?/

Yeah it has XP

Sure thing ^^

First off, lose the belt and Hair pin. It just random splashes of silver/white to the avi and it throws the eye flow off. I would suggest a black belt and if you need/want a hairpin go with a gold/red one. I would also suggest a black neck item as well to help bring in more black to the avi. Maybe the tie?

Over all a good job with the pumpkin mask and use of colors, though I like to see more orange at the bottom.

8/10 nicely done ^^

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Originally Posted by Eserel

Good thinking lol XD

Well for starts you do need more black at the bottom and pink.

Lets start with the bottom:

Have you thought about using any of the below:

Wicked wizard boots
Strawberry Truffle Saddle Shoes
Bitter Hag Heels
Bitter Hag Flats
Regret's Boots
Cherished Boots

I picked those because they either had black/red or red/pink, which are some of the colors you need at the bottom. You could always go with a pair of boots then add leg warmers over top?

up top:

Maybe a blue/purplish hair pin would be a better idea than a pink one, or try one of the new pink head bands then ad a blue/purple hairpin to it.

Try adding the pink or black heart tattoo, that could help the avi as well.

Over all its very cute and a nice set of layering down with it.

8/10

Oh and your current avi is very nice as well ^^

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Originally Posted by JamesB14

Nope, you can never post to much in here XD
I like the hair color change it helps a lot and it does help to make things stand out more on your avi. Good job ^^

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Originally Posted by Eserel

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I second the silver suggestion.
That would look killer cool.

Yup it would ^^

I'm glad it makes it better :3 And I'm also glad I can't post in here too much XD
Would you say your rating of it has changed, since I've changed it since last rating?

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Originally Posted by JamesB14

I'm glad it makes it better :3 And I'm also glad I can't post in here too much XD
Would you say your rating of it has changed, since I've changed it since last rating?

lol yeah, I would never tell anyone they were posting to much XD that would be bad for business.

Maybe a half a point :/ it still missing something... Maybe a different top could help?

Thanks a lot! I definitely agree with the belt / hairpin thing. Not sure why I even equipped them. Hahaha.

What do you think of it with this belt, but no hairpin. I have the red temptress pin, but it doesn't look right. I'm not sure if the this belt goes or not..

I also switched to Phoenix Pants. Better than the Summer Pants? The only reason I didn't use them in the first place is it seems like I always have them on. XD

AND, just so you know. Your avatar with the pumpkin mask inspired me to make this. XDD <3

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Wow, I feel so muse like XD Thanks <3

Well the belt does go but you really need black in the mid section so a black belt would be best.

Those pants look a thousand times better and help with the over all look of the avi so much.

So now just a black belt, black neck item and have you tried a hand held yet? that would/could really set this avi off ^^

Hahahahaha.

Alright, I added a black cutie scarf & black belt. And now I remember why I didn't use this belt to begin with. It seems too.. light.

EDIT || Removed the cutie scarf.. Does it look better with just the odyssey suit?

Also, I have tried a couple handhelds. But, I don't have many and the ones I do have aren't that great.. Any suggestions though?

Does the heart box work?

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

I see what you mean about the belt, it does seem to light.

The heart box works though, just wish they had a darker black belt.

Did you try any other neck items?

Just the odyssey suit? uhm.. dunno...