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Mozzetti 02-24-2008 02:09 AM


Yeah, I really don't like the belt...

But the only other black neck item I have is the cutie scarf. I just put it on again. What do you think?

Furious 02-24-2008 06:14 AM

A new top? As in shirt? D: I don't plan on changing this shirt. I love the way the shirt and skirt, using the belt, look like one whole shirt, rather than two separate items. I like that effect too much, and I'd rather not change it ): I don't get the same look with a different shirt. I've tried.
Thanks anyway for your time and opinions, though :3

Divine_lil_brat 02-24-2008 08:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Yeah, I really don't like the belt...

But the only other black neck item I have is the cutie scarf. I just put it on again. What do you think?

I think the cutie scarf work fines ^^

But yes a dark belt would rock... :/


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Originally Posted by JamesB14
A new top? As in shirt? D: I don't plan on changing this shirt. I love the way the shirt and skirt, using the belt, look like one whole shirt, rather than two separate items. I like that effect too much, and I'd rather not change it ): I don't get the same look with a different shirt. I've tried.
Thanks anyway for your time and opinions, though :3


lol yeah but now I see your point. hhmm Maybe something will pop up over the next couple of days and if anythings does I'll let you know ^^

Muggles Running Amok 02-24-2008 08:36 PM



I can't decide if I like this skirt better or the regret skirt. This one is adorable. The regret skirt, however, brings black ribbons to the bottom. I think this one looks better with the overall theme, though.


Divine_lil_brat 02-25-2008 07:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


I can't decide if I like this skirt better or the regret skirt. This one is adorable. The regret skirt, however, brings black ribbons to the bottom. I think this one looks better with the overall theme, though.



hhmmm...I'm torn between the two. I liked the other one because of the ribbons but this one also works out nicely. -shrugs- at this point both work and if you get tired of one, you could always switch it out for the other one just to change it up. ^^

juniper_silver 02-25-2008 08:32 PM

Hi, I was wondering if you could offer some suggestions for my avi(you might have to refresh to see it). I was thinking about switching this belt out for the pure hatred belt when I get a little more gold...or maybe a smaller black one. What do you think about the belt and in general?

Divine_lil_brat 02-25-2008 09:38 PM

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Originally Posted by juniper_silver
Hi, I was wondering if you could offer some suggestions for my avi(you might have to refresh to see it). I was thinking about switching this belt out for the pure hatred belt when I get a little more gold...or maybe a smaller black one. What do you think about the belt and in general?


Sure thing ^^

Over all I like the colors used and the layering that was done. I like how most of the colors flow head to toe and the items blend nicely with each other. I don't understand why the random blue skirt and earings but I do like the combo. As for the belt, I like it keep the middle of the avi light in color and feel. If you were to add a darker belt to the avi it could possible mess with the color flow. Right now the light/white colored items from all the way through the avi but if you were to but a darker belt on it might mess with that flow and make the avi look sloppy.

As of right now I like the random-ness of the avi but some more blue itens would be a good idea to help even out the blue balance. Maybe a necklace and/ or blue tiara culd help.

8/10, very random, very cute. Love the current belt with this avi ^^

juniper_silver 02-26-2008 06:30 AM

Thank you for the input. I think I will take your advice and keep this belt for now. I added the sapphire tiara that I own, the only problem is it has silver on it. I don't think it's very obvious and hopefully it's not messing up the color scheme...It seems a little off to me, but maybe I'm just being picky.
I do have a blue anklet on too, but it's very hard to see with these tights.
Thanks again for helping me with my fashion issues. :D

Divine_lil_brat 02-26-2008 07:06 AM

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Originally Posted by juniper_silver
Thank you for the input. I think I will take your advice and keep this belt for now. I added the sapphire tiara that I own, the only problem is it has silver on it. I don't think it's very obvious and hopefully it's not messing up the color scheme...It seems a little off to me, but maybe I'm just being picky.
I do have a blue anklet on too, but it's very hard to see with these tights.
Thanks again for helping me with my fashion issues. :D

Sure thing and the tiara looks fine, you can't tell or even see the silver that well. It looks good ^^

Mozzetti 02-26-2008 04:12 PM


Divine !

A rate on this new avatar, please ?

Abis 02-26-2008 06:29 PM

Hey Divine.
XD

I'm not really here for a rate, since this one has been rated enough times. Just figured I'd stop in and say hey while I try to figure out a new avvy.

Neyor 02-27-2008 06:03 PM

May I get another critique on my red/blue/black avatar please? :3

Divine_lil_brat 02-28-2008 07:30 AM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Divine !

A rate on this new avatar, please ?

of course ^^

Well for starters The pink is a lil random and if you want to keep it, then you need to add more pink through out the rest of the avi. Putting the pink aside, it looks good. The gold and green are evenly done through out the avi but the blue only seem to be here and there like the pink. Try adding the new pink heart tattoo and maybe a under shirt? or take it off and try adding more blue on the avi. Or you could try both, though that may prove to be more difficult.

8/10 I like the colors and the overall layering on the avi. Just wish the blue and pink were more evenly through the avi.

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Originally Posted by Abis
Hey Divine.
XD

I'm not really here for a rate, since this one has been rated enough times. Just figured I'd stop in and say hey while I try to figure out a new avvy.


Aww thanks Abis, thats so randomly sweet/nice of you. New avi means a new look, whatcha got in mind?



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Originally Posted by Neyor
May I get another critique on my red/blue/black avatar please? :3



Sure thing ^^

Well I like the set of colors you chose to use and the way you layered the items to get the overall effect.

A few things I don't like are:

The crown, doesn't really match anything on the avi. Not even the wings.

The cloak only because it brings so much black and not enough red to the avi.

What I might suggest, a red neck item to help breakup all the black around the neck area and top. A different head item beside the crown. The head band and hair pin rock. And everything else seems to be in its place and looks well balance aside from what I said.

8/10 love the colors, just need to break up the up top. Very nice though ^^

Kadrias 02-28-2008 06:01 PM

I've never really tried something like this before.. but I guess I'll give it a shot. :3
I just wanted to make an avi using the chicky. xD
What do you think? owo;; <3

Mozzetti 02-28-2008 08:01 PM


Thanks, and I know what you mean.

I'll try and figure something else out, but not sure if it will be any good. I wish there were more small jackets. XD

Muggles Running Amok 02-28-2008 10:12 PM



Divineee.

I want a simple green, black, and white avatar. I'm not really trying for admin's pick, but I guess it could still win because Abis's winning avatar was just black and blue.

What do you think, and what could I add to it? Right now it looks plain to me.

Thanks a bunch!


Neyor 03-01-2008 07:00 PM

Thanks. <33

Yeah I don't know what I was thinking when I put the crown on. :lol: It's gone now but I don't know if there's anything I should equip in it's place.

Aaw, and here I was thinking that the vday pendant was enough. xD I tried with the red bandana as well but the red feels off and it feels like there's too much red with it. I don't know what else I can try. o:

Rawrsaurus 03-01-2008 08:41 PM

Mmm, I'll give this a shot. Could I get a rate please? ^^

Sakura_Madison 03-02-2008 12:51 AM

Hello Divine!

I would like a rating please on my latest creation.

MessyArtist 03-02-2008 12:53 AM

Could someone Critique me? I do wish to be admins pick, but not good enough...Just need to add an item...

Divine_lil_brat 03-02-2008 07:46 AM

Hey guys ^^ Sorry I haven't gotten back sooner. I thought my thread died seeing how I didn't get any alerts via email that people had posted here. I'll bne working on these until caught up.

Thanks for waiting XD

~Divine~



Quote:

Originally Posted by Kadrias
I've never really tried something like this before.. but I guess I'll give it a shot. :3
I just wanted to make an avi using the chicky. xD
What do you think? owo;; <3


I think your avi has changed since then lol

But I can rate your current avi if you like XD

I think I'm going to anyways XD

Well I like the layering and the color use. I would however like to see more red on top to draw more up top. Right now the red in a big blob in the middle and draws the eye from the head and that interrupts the flow of head to toe, thats very bad. More red about the bottom would be a good idea as well. Right now the black and silver/white empowers this avi but the red needs to be more balanced to make the avi work to its best potential.

7/10 very nice start. If you liek me to rate your other avi, just upload a pi for me ^^


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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Thanks, and I know what you mean.

I'll try and figure something else out, but not sure if it will be any good. I wish there were more small jackets. XD

yeah, I would have to agree with you on that. I'm sure something will turn up soon ^^

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


Divineee.

I want a simple green, black, and white avatar. I'm not really trying for admin's pick, but I guess it could still win because Abis's winning avatar was just black and blue.

What do you think, and what could I add to it? Right now it looks plain to me.

Thanks a bunch!



Hello Miss muggles ,

Nice to see yo back again ^^ Love returning customers XD

Well I really like your avi. I stopped and actually looked at over and over, I love the color combo. I've yet to see this combo or at least one this member able. The flow is head to toe (love the new wings) and the same can be said with the color flow. I do however wish the skirt was a deeper shade of black. The crown, wings and heart tat. make the avi very playful and cute to look at. I liked to see some green around the hands, maybe green cuffs, if they have them or maybe a green hand held in that shade of green. I'm pretty impressed at how close all the greens are to each other and how well things are layered to create the overall look.

I'm torn on the over all rate, so I'm gonna go ahead and rate low, sorry :/

8.5/10 its so close to a 9 but it does need to be evened out a lil bit more in the greens. But other than that, very pretty avi, love it on a personal level ^^



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Originally Posted by Neyor
Thanks. <33

Yeah I don't know what I was thinking when I put the crown on. :lol: It's gone now but I don't know if there's anything I should equip in it's place.

Aaw, and here I was thinking that the vday pendant was enough. xD I tried with the red bandana as well but the red feels off and it feels like there's too much red with it. I don't know what else I can try. o:

Yeah I see your point with the bandana but it does help to even out the red a lil. But no the head is lack in black, you could try the new wings, those could work. As for the red, I'm kinda at a lost at this pint. Maybe try adding that new black belt mid drift thing, that could work to draw the black to the red and even up the blocks of color a lil. Just an idea though ^^


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Originally Posted by Rawrsaurus
Mmm, I'll give this a shot. Could I get a rate please? ^^


0.0 wow love the layering and color(s) combo(s) XD

Where to start, I'm just stunned to see such an awesome avi, but then again, you do awesome work. Just finished looking over your entry on Project mene XD

Any who, on to your avi.

Well I love the body of the avi and how all the colors flow head to toe and the eye flow is right along with the color flow. My two main concerns for this avi would be the head and the feet. The body of the avi, amazing and very well done, but it leaves the head and feet lacking. I know there isn't much you can do with the head but maybe with feet tr adding gold socks or a different color thats already int he avi to draw it down. The read of the shoes is enough red, try purple or gold, maybe even white. As for the head, I'm at a lost seeing how layering is limited right now. Though the new white wings would look nice with this avi if you could keep the other items as well. If not, you could try the bells with this av, they could work.

9.5/10 congrats to making it to the front page ^^ I love this avi personal and as a judge, very well done.



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Originally Posted by Sakura_Madison
Hello Divine!

I would like a rating please on my latest creation.


Sure thing, one rate coming up ^^

Very interesting to say the least. The flow is head to toe and the layering is very well done as well. I would however like to see more red up top and more red on the legs, but those are just suggestions. I like it but it seems the colors are in streams and section.

My biggest suggestion right now, would be to add more red up top. Its lacking in red and beign overpowered in white.

7/10 just needs to be layered better and more balance in colors.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Princess Emeraude
Could someone Critique me? I do wish to be admins pick, but not good enough...Just need to add an item...


simple, yet cute. I would suggest more white on the head, maybe the new wings and more shades of that off white color in your avi. You have white/black/off white. So I think gloves would be good idea and possible a hand held as well. Its good start base, now you just need to build on it.

6/10 there wasn't much to rate or go on, so just for now suggestion on how to improve on it ^^

Rawrsaurus 03-02-2008 09:15 AM

Thanks a lot for the rate ^^ Heheh, I was thinkings lots of the things you said and have been playing around. Wish mene did have gold socks x_x; I was wearing gold bells before, but people were telling me the ribbons were a ligher shade of red than the rest of the avi so I removed them.

Lol, the tunic I bought for my contest entry got me to make this outfit xD

I'll definitely try the new headbands once I get them, with maybe white socks. Thankies for the advice ^^

Divine_lil_brat 03-02-2008 09:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Rawrsaurus
Thanks a lot for the rate ^^ Heheh, I was thinkings lots of the things you said and have been playing around. Wish mene did have gold socks x_x; I was wearing gold bells before, but people were telling me the ribbons were a ligher shade of red than the rest of the avi so I removed them.

Lol, the tunic I bought for my contest entry got me to make this outfit xD

I'll definitely try the new headbands once I get them, with maybe white socks. Thankies for the advice ^^



Your welcome :D

I thought they did... maybe I was thinking of the gold boots. Yeah well I maced it with bells, not so great but it could pass XD

Well I love the tunic, so very pretty :D

G'luck with all that and I hope the suggestions help ^
^

Cyndel 03-02-2008 12:37 PM

Wahaha here I am up at ungodly hours of the morning again. >.>

Still basically the same avi I had you picking apart before, took off junk and added more junk. >.>

Whatcha think?

vadeil 03-02-2008 03:42 PM

rate my new creation please ^.^


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