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Atlantis 03-20-2008 06:01 AM

Hello Divine! I was wondering if you can rate an avatar that I had just made earlier from Temmon's Mac Avatar Creator Program:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...Meneavatar.jpg

Well I haven't seen anyone /win/ admin's pick using those donation items, so I wanted to create a "matching" avatar. With that, I am hoping to win that award with this imaginary outfit that I have in mind.

Hopefully everything is okay and any suggestions on how I can perhaps improve it is highly appreciated ^^

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 07:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Atlantis
Hello Divine! I was wondering if you can rate an avatar that I had just made earlier from Temmon's Mac Avatar Creator Program:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...Meneavatar.jpg

Well I haven't seen anyone /win/ admin's pick using those donation items, so I wanted to create a "matching" avatar. With that, I am hoping to win that award with this imaginary outfit that I have in mind.

Hopefully everything is okay and any suggestions on how I can perhaps improve it is highly appreciated ^^


Well thats very impressive 0.0 I love it and all but the mask still doesn't go, only because of the awful shade of green. Everything else seems to be balanced color wise and the flow is head to toe and I love how you layered things. Word of caution though, a lot of times things layer differently on the MAC then they do on mene itself. Trust me, that happens to me all the time.

8/10 I love it but at the same time, I know a lot of those items don't layer with each other. But maybe by the time you get all the gold for that avi,k the layering may be different :D

Atlantis 03-20-2008 07:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by Atlantis
Hello Divine! I was wondering if you can rate an avatar that I had just made earlier from Temmon's Mac Avatar Creator Program:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...Meneavatar.jpg

Well I haven't seen anyone /win/ admin's pick using those donation items, so I wanted to create a "matching" avatar. With that, I am hoping to win that award with this imaginary outfit that I have in mind.

Hopefully everything is okay and any suggestions on how I can perhaps improve it is highly appreciated ^^


Well thats very impressive 0.0 I love it and all but the mask still doesn't go, only because of the awful shade of green. Everything else seems to be balanced color wise and the flow is head to toe and I love how you layered things. Word of caution though, a lot of times things layer differently on the MAC then they do on mene itself. Trust me, that happens to me all the time.

8/10 I love it but at the same time, I know a lot of those items don't layer with each other. But maybe by the time you get all the gold for that avi,k the layering may be different :D

Alright. Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it alot :) Yeah, I agree. There isn't much that you can do with the mask as of right now considering that there isn't any shades of that green available yet. Haha

But thank you so much again ^-^;;

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 07:05 AM

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Originally Posted by Atlantis
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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by Atlantis
Hello Divine! I was wondering if you can rate an avatar that I had just made earlier from Temmon's Mac Avatar Creator Program:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...Meneavatar.jpg

Well I haven't seen anyone /win/ admin's pick using those donation items, so I wanted to create a "matching" avatar. With that, I am hoping to win that award with this imaginary outfit that I have in mind.

Hopefully everything is okay and any suggestions on how I can perhaps improve it is highly appreciated ^^


Well thats very impressive 0.0 I love it and all but the mask still doesn't go, only because of the awful shade of green. Everything else seems to be balanced color wise and the flow is head to toe and I love how you layered things. Word of caution though, a lot of times things layer differently on the MAC then they do on mene itself. Trust me, that happens to me all the time.

8/10 I love it but at the same time, I know a lot of those items don't layer with each other. But maybe by the time you get all the gold for that avi,k the layering may be different :D

Alright. Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it alot :) Yeah, I agree. There isn't much that you can do with the mask as of right now considering that there isn't any shades of that green available yet. Haha

But thank you so much again ^-^;;

Yeah, its a shame. I've wanted to use the mask but it never went with anything. But by far you've come the closes I've seen to matching/ working the mask in with the avi. So best of luck to you on getting it to work out for you and all :D I think you can do it.

`~alisha~ 03-20-2008 05:40 PM

=3 May I please have a rate? I kinda like my plain avi but I want to know what other's think. <3

Abis 03-20-2008 06:06 PM

Rate me, please?

New avvy temporarily complete.
XD

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 08:08 PM

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Originally Posted by `~alisha~
=3 May I please have a rate? I kinda like my plain avi but I want to know what other's think. <3


Its cute, simple but some red gloves would be nice as well as a red neck item, it will/would help the flow of colors to go head to toe more completely. Maybe add a heart tattoo to bring black to the face as well.

6/10 its cute but very simple :D not a bad start.


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Originally Posted by Abis
Rate me, please?

New avvy temporarily complete.
XD


Love it, the colors flow head to toe evenly, and the use of items and colors is amazing. My only really problem with this avi is, I liked to see more white on the legs. But other than that its still well balanced and the colors rock out loud with each other :D

9.5/10 love the glitch :D and congrats on making it to the front page :D

padfootsy 03-20-2008 08:23 PM

Okay!
I have made some very minute tweaks, and this is what I have!

The silver on the belt looks white to me, and doesn't 'throw off' anything. It's either that, or a black belt that doesn't quite match.

I'm not sure how I feel about the stockings, but who knows. Maybe everyone will like it more.

Rate away! Thanks! ^^

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 08:29 PM

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Originally Posted by padfootsy
Okay!
I have made some very minute tweaks, and this is what I have!

The silver on the belt looks white to me, and doesn't 'throw off' anything. It's either that, or a black belt that doesn't quite match.

I'm not sure how I feel about the stockings, but who knows. Maybe everyone will like it more.

Rate away! Thanks! ^^

The changes that I've notice are cute and add a nice flare to the avi. As for the belt, eh if you like, you like it :D no worries on this end. The stockings you have right now work just fine.

8.5/10

padfootsy 03-20-2008 08:33 PM

Thank you!

It's so frustrating. I can't figure out anything else to add to make it look better.

Until we get new items, I'm at a standstill.

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 08:35 PM

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Originally Posted by padfootsy
Thank you!

It's so frustrating. I can't figure out anything else to add to make it look better.

Until we get new items, I'm at a standstill.


Yeah I know whatcha mean....Thats how I am with my current avi, but its mostly with just layering. -sighs- its pain it works on mac but not on mene.

padfootsy 03-20-2008 08:38 PM

That's so frustrating. I had the same problem with the little black singlet thing. It won't layer with belts. D;

Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 08:40 PM

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Originally Posted by padfootsy
That's so frustrating. I had the same problem with the little black singlet thing. It won't layer with belts. D;

yeah? gawd its annoying, but I guess I'll just go with these gloves for now until the layering is changed to fit my needs XD

Muggles Running Amok 03-20-2008 08:43 PM



Hey Divine. I know this isn't really great. I just sort of threw it together- I wanted a color scheme again, got a little tired of the depressing black & gold and white alone.

can you help me? Green shoes add green to the bottom, and I need that, but I also need to match the cake and the dress at the bottom, but that color is sort of minor. I wanted it to be darker at the feet so it had sort of a definite end.


Divine_lil_brat 03-20-2008 08:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


Hey Divine. I know this isn't really great. I just sort of threw it together- I wanted a color scheme again, got a little tired of the depressing black & gold and white alone.

can you help me? Green shoes add green to the bottom, and I need that, but I also need to match the cake and the dress at the bottom, but that color is sort of minor. I wanted it to be darker at the feet so it had sort of a definite end.


Well I think its fine for right now, an 8/10 easy. The purse helps a lil with bringing the red down but I like how the green is predominant through out the avi and how te red is more of an accent color than anything else. Maybe try adding red stockings/ socks so the red could be see on the leg a lil and a lil through the shoe. Try adding the red contact to help bring the red down from the head and into the dress more smoothly. But I think for right now the purse works the best, and there really isn't anything else that you could use to bring red down unless you use the new fan/scarf combo thing that came out for v-day. It would work.

Muggles Running Amok 03-20-2008 09:44 PM



Thanks divine. I love how you acknowledged that red isn't the main color. I'm tired of red being my main color. xD I feel that the contacts would kind of overcrowd the head and overshadow the hairpin.


The Wandering Poet 03-21-2008 12:01 AM

Hey Divine, it's me again... I was wondering how my avi looks.

I feel like it needs dark green stockings or something though :( but Menewsha doesn't seem to have any...

I'm still hoping to keep the fan though...

Navi 03-21-2008 12:19 AM

Hi Divine, I'm just wondering if I can get a rate on this avi? =]

EDIT: nevermind, changed avatars. ^^;

Paprika 03-21-2008 12:59 AM

This is pretty much the final version, the Clover was there for St.P's so its not part of my outfit. The only thing missing is the silver tiara going on my forehead and the staff of heaven. :) (You can see my final product in siggie)

Abis 03-21-2008 02:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by Abis
Rate me, please?

New avvy temporarily complete.
XD


Love it, the colors flow head to toe evenly, and the use of items and colors is amazing. My only really problem with this avi is, I liked to see more white on the legs. But other than that its still well balanced and the colors rock out loud with each other :D

9.5/10 love the glitch :D and congrats on making it to the front page :D

Thank you.
^ . ^

And, yeah, I'm wearing the white stockings, but the harp covers them up, and we definitely don't have white gold and black shoes that would work.
XD

I love your new avvy, btw.

EDIT : Heh, I'm on the front page three times, now.

Clorissa 03-21-2008 03:22 AM


Would you please rate my avatar?

Intoxicate 03-21-2008 03:30 AM


Rate me, please? :]
I'm not really looking to get admin's pick, though. xD

Foxxi 03-21-2008 03:40 AM

Could you rate mines Divi?

Anglie 03-21-2008 09:10 PM

could you please rate my avi? (last time, you only quoted what I said, but didn't rate)

Korrye 03-21-2008 09:53 PM

Hey Divine. I came up with this outfit on MAC and it layered fine for me. I need a rate on it and any suggestions. I'm stuck on what to add for socks or a handheld. The royal bow isn't in the MAC and I have no idea what it looks like on an avatar. I was thinking maybe that or a purple purse. Any suggestions would be awesome though.
<3


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