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Divine_lil_brat 03-23-2008 08:58 AM

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


Thanks divine. I love how you acknowledged that red
isn't the main color. I'm tired of red being my main color. xD I feel that the contacts would kind of overcrowd the head and overshadow the hairpin.




Yeah, well you can tell :D as for the contacts, I think your right, so maybe not. I'm just in love with them.

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Hey Divine, it's me again... I was wondering how my avi looks.

I feel like it needs dark green stockings or something though :( but Menewsha doesn't seem to have any...

I'm still hoping to keep the fan though...


uhm, at this point I would add a green belt, green gloves and the dark green striped stockings could work well with this avi. I think you should be able to keep the fan. :D


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Originally Posted by Navidian
Hi Divine, I'm just wondering if I can get a rate on this avi? =]

EDIT: nevermind, changed avatars. ^^;


Okay, sorry it took me so long. Been busy and distracted.


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Originally Posted by Paprika
This is pretty much the final version, the Clover was there for St.P's so its not part of my outfit. The only thing missing is the silver tiara going on my forehead and the staff of heaven. :) (You can see my final product in siggie)

Okay, well its very set-ish. Like everything... But the colors flow head to toe and you can't really see the head wings, so you might as well remove them if you don't plan on adding more white to your avi to help draw the white all the way through the avi to make it balanced.

6/10, very set-ish.


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Originally Posted by Abis
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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat
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Originally Posted by Abis
Rate me, please?

New avvy temporarily complete.
XD


Love it, the colors flow head to toe evenly, and the use of items and colors is amazing. My only really problem with this avi is, I liked to see more white on the legs. But other than that its still well balanced and the colors rock out loud with each other :D

9.5/10 love the glitch :D and congrats on making it to the front page :D

Thank you.
^ . ^

And, yeah, I'm wearing the white stockings, but the harp covers them up, and we definitely don't have white gold and black shoes that would work.
XD

I love your new avvy, btw.

EDIT : Heh, I'm on the front page three times, now.


Aww thanks Abis, I'm still working on it :D

oh and congrats for making it three times now XD


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Originally Posted by Clorissa

Would you please rate my avatar?


of course :D

I like it, though the top seems to be a lil white heavy and a few different shades of green. Though the light shades of green are all in the mid section, so you could always make the hair a shade lighter, that way the greens go light to dark and give the eye something else to feed on. Adding some gold items would be a good idea as well to help bring the gold from the halo all the way through the avi rather than just have the halo as a back ground color.

6/10 cute but need some work.


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Originally Posted by Intoxicate

Rate me, please? :]
I'm not really looking to get admin's pick, though. xD

Wow, so randomly pretty :D

I love how you layered it and how the colors flow head to toe, the the fox is a bit random and only really matches the sprigs of white form other items here and there. So in one sense it helps the other white pop. I like how its cluttered yet simple in a way. Though I would think about adding the black heart tattoo to add black to the face in a sublet way. Love the color combo and use of items to create the over all look. Though some black in the mid section would be nice other than the boa, but oh well.

9/10 love the color combo and how random the combo is.

Congrats on making it to the front page :D


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Originally Posted by ~Fox.of.Fire~
Could you rate mines Divi?

Of course Foxxi :D

Well the color flow is head to toe as well the eye flow. The use of items is refreshing. I think gold shoes could better enhance this avi seeing how the gold of the harp is lighter than any of the other golds used. It matched the halo but thats about it.

7/10 cute but lacking, try the gold boots. They could help :D


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Originally Posted by Anglie
could you please rate my avi? (last time, you only quoted what I said, but didn't rate)


Oh my, I'm so sorry. I total remember looking at your avi too. Sorry T.T

Cute, set-ish but cute. uhm, I would suggest breaking up the set and adding gloves, a neck item and maybe stockings, as well another head item. So first pick out and color scheme you want to go with, then a style, then go from there. Right now its cute but very plain .

4/10


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Originally Posted by Korrye
Hey Divine. I came up with this outfit on MAC and it layered fine for me. I need a rate on it and any suggestions. I'm stuck on what to add for socks or a handheld. The royal bow isn't in the MAC and I have no idea what it looks like on an avatar. I was thinking maybe that or a purple purse. Any suggestions would be awesome though.
<3


Wow, another amazing avi. Why am I not surprised?

Well lets see, the flow is head to toe, color and eye. The combo is different and well put together. Some suggestion would be:

Hand held- Round fan of fortune
Legs- regret leggings.

And maybe something to help the pink on the sash to pop more.

9/10, love it but I know it could enhanced:D

Congrats on making it to the front page again :D

Anglie 03-23-2008 11:45 AM

thank you ^_^

Navi 03-23-2008 02:18 PM

No worries Divine! I just changed into a rather boring avatar at that time and didn't want you to think that's what I wanted rated. ^^;

On that note, I'd be interested in your opinion on this avatar (pink/white/green)

Muggles Running Amok 03-23-2008 03:05 PM



Happy Easter, Divine!


Caeluma 03-23-2008 03:27 PM

i have always wanted to be admin's pick but I guess my avi is ever outstanding enough though i always like them and thats what counts!

Intoxicate 03-23-2008 04:37 PM


Thanks, I'll look into your suggestions.<3 MAC time!

The Wandering Poet 03-23-2008 05:54 PM

Thanks Divine, but I was wondering if I should use the Green Leather Gloves or the Evergreen gloves.

I MACed it and I can't decide >.<

I feel really out of season right now... since easter is yellowish... and x-mas is red/green o.o

clock 03-23-2008 07:32 PM


Divine ~ Could I please get a rate when you have time? <3

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 03:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Anglie
thank you ^_^

Your welcome :D

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Originally Posted by Navidian
No worries Divine! I just changed into a rather boring avatar at that time and didn't want you to think that's what I wanted rated. ^^;

On that note, I'd be interested in your opinion on this avatar (pink/white/green)


Very cute :D, Though I think some green around the neck would really help balance out the greens on the avi. Right now the pink and white seem to be overpowering the green. So that extra touch of green would do wonders for you avi.

8/10, love the duckie :D


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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


Happy Easter, Divine!



Thanks Muggles, You too! :D


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Originally Posted by Caeluma
i have always wanted to be admin's pick but I guess my avi is ever outstanding enough though i always like them and thats what counts!

Yeah? well maybe if you try making them pop more, you could be noticed by the admin's. Did you want a rate?

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Originally Posted by Intoxicate

Thanks, I'll look into your suggestions.<3 MAC time!

Okay, I hope they work out for you :D

I should use the Green Leather Gloves or the Evergreen gloves.

I MACed it and I can't decide >.<

I feel really out of season right now... since easter is yellowish... and x-mas is red/green o.o[/quote]


I MAC it too, I liked the green leather gloves more than I did the evergreen. They seemed to match the other shades of green more.


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Originally Posted by clock

Divine ~ Could I please get a rate when you have time? <3

Of course you may :D

Well for starters it seems to be overpower by the gold, so maybe a different hair style could help, you can keep it long...just not that long. The panda seems out of place as being the only black/white item that is noticeable on the avi. Byt I do see why you chose to use it.

Over all its very cute and well balanced for the most part. Its kinda preppy princess meets punk. 8/10.

The Wandering Poet 03-25-2008 04:01 AM

Hey divine, back (again) to check up on how I'm doing... I'm not sure but I think maybe I might be close to finishing it finally xD

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 04:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Hey divine, back (again) to check up on how I'm doing... I'm not sure but I think maybe I might be close to finishing it finally xD


Uhm, did you get gloves? Other than that, its coming along nicely :D

The Wandering Poet 03-25-2008 05:44 AM

Well I think you missed my post about gloves earlier... because I can't decide on the leather green gloves or the x-mas gloves (Green Leather Gloves or Evergreen Gloves)

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 06:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
Well I think you missed my post about gloves earlier... because I can't decide on the leather green gloves or the x-mas gloves (Green Leather Gloves or Evergreen Gloves)


I quoted you but the quote bubble didn't work. I said I mac it too and I liked the green leather gloves over the ever green gloves.

The Wandering Poet 03-25-2008 06:44 AM

oh >.< that's probably why I missed it...

Yeah I kinda thought so too... just wanted another opinion ^^

I'll probably post tomorrow when I get the gloves for a rating ^^

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 06:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
oh >.< that's probably why I missed it...

Yeah I kinda thought so too... just wanted another opinion ^^

I'll probably post tomorrow when I get the gloves for a rating ^^

KK sounds like a plan then. Are you planning on keeping the wing and lamb?

The Wandering Poet 03-25-2008 07:05 AM

I'm not sure, do they fit the avi? I feel like there should be more white on the left side though... the white feels kinda overbalanced...

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 09:23 AM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
I'm not sure, do they fit the avi? I feel like there should be more white on the left side though... the white feels kinda overbalanced...

yeah, hmmm They could work, though you have have to add white in the mid section to draw the white all the way through the avi. hhmmm off to MAC I go :D

Edit:

Whatcha think about these two? Of course no lambie for now, seeing how it isn't on MAC yet :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...enB17/avi7.jpg

Just added some more white to them, to help bring the white all the way down the avi to the lamb. To try and help even thins out.

The Wandering Poet 03-25-2008 04:16 PM

oh wow... I absolutely love the 2nd one o.o

I think ima go with that one :)

Korrye 03-25-2008 08:03 PM

Thanks Divine. I think that the fan will be a good handheld. I just have to save up my gold again. xD
I appreciate the compliments. ^^

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 11:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear
oh wow... I absolutely love the 2nd one o.o

I think ima go with that one :)


Yay, I'm glad you like it. I wasn't sure which one would work best for you. Glad I could help :D


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Originally Posted by Korrye
Thanks Divine. I think that the fan will be a good handheld. I just have to save up my gold again. xD
I appreciate the compliments. ^^


Your welcome, I'm glad I could help and I glad you think so too. I think it will set your avi off really well. :D

Navi 03-25-2008 11:06 PM

Hi again. *chuckles nervously* I've changed my avatar again, would you mine rating this one as well? ^^;

Divine_lil_brat 03-25-2008 11:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Navidian
Hi again. *chuckles nervously* I've changed my avatar again, would you mine rating this one as well? ^^;

Sure thing :D Don't be nervous, it looks good.

I like the use of items and the way the colors flow form head to toe. Though I think the hair should be a shade darker, to match all the other shades of blue used on the avi. I think some purple around the neck would really help draw the purple up and make the color flow more even.

7/10, I like the color used and the style, though I think more purple up top would really balance it out. :D

clock 03-26-2008 01:29 AM


Thanks for the rating, Divine. :3 I love this hair, I don't think I can bring myself to use anything else without it looking odd to me. xD

http://i25.tinypic.com/5efgw5.jpg

The stockings seem to look lighter and weird without the hair being right next to them. Maybe they'll come out with all gold socks/ stockings some day. :0

Navi 03-26-2008 02:18 AM

I think this ribbon around the neck helps - even for how little purple it adds. I tried changing the blue of my hair and it just didn't work, it dulled it down too much for me and the trim on the pants and the gloves seemed out of place then. Thanks for your suggestions! Now I'm grappling with the idea of including or omitting the birds. =]

Divine_lil_brat 03-26-2008 03:39 AM

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Originally Posted by clock

Thanks for the rating, Divine. :3 I love this hair, I don't think I can bring myself to use anything else without it looking odd to me. xD

http://i25.tinypic.com/5efgw5.jpg

The stockings seem to look lighter and weird without the hair being right next to them. Maybe they'll come out with all gold socks/ stockings some day. :0

Yeah, I see what you mean. To bad but yeah maybe one day but for now, we just gotta work with what they give us :D


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Originally Posted by Navidian
I think this ribbon around the neck helps - even for how little purple it adds. I tried changing the blue of my hair and it just didn't work, it dulled it down too much for me and the trim on the pants and the gloves seemed out of place then. Thanks for your suggestions! Now I'm grappling with the idea of including or omitting the birds. =]

The ribbon works well, I wouldn't omit the birds. They add character to the avi and work so well with the avi.


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