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Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 01:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198630389.jpg

Update. Im not so sure about the layering, i did my best. I really do want to keep the boots, oh and i could not put the leg coolers on them. Is it better?

Its pretty good, but The hairpin now, adds to much gold, try some of the others. As for the boots they look good but they don't allow for light blue to be about the feet. You could try taking out all the light blue stuff :/

Rasengan 12-26-2007 01:19 AM

I could... but i really want to keep the wings. Or should i? Mm... then what hairpin should i use? Or should I even use one at all? Or maybe just turn the hair gold?

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 01:25 AM

new Hanukkah Hairpin or Night Hairpin or Golden lunar hairpin

Uhm, are all those items in the avi creator yet? If so I can try and mess with it, if not ....Let me think about if for a few.

Rasengan 12-26-2007 01:27 AM

They are not.... and I really don't want to use 3 set items... would that decrease my chance at winning the admins pick?

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 01:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
They are not.... and I really don't want to use 3 set items... would that decrease my chance at winning the admins pick?

ya know, I don't know if it would or not. Maybe try the nigh hair pin instead of the day and try using the blue bird or snow flakes to add more blue around the feet.

Rasengan 12-26-2007 01:42 AM

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198632305.jpg

Ok , ill try that too.

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 01:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198632305.jpg

Ok , ill try that too.

I like it better, but now to me the crown seems a bit out of place. How about a lighter color. How the hell are you making those so fast?

Rasengan 12-26-2007 01:48 AM

Paint XD, I saved them... I just go back and copy and paste. Mm... lighter hair color? This is hard... But do you think it has potential?

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 01:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
Paint XD, I saved them... I just go back and copy and paste. Mm... lighter hair color? This is hard... But do you think it has potential?


I think its a great idea and I love it so far, but the tweaking to make it great will take time. :/ This part is always the hardest.

Rasengan 12-26-2007 01:57 AM

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198633398.jpg

Ok, thank you so much for helping me tweak it.

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 02:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198633398.jpg

Ok, thank you so much for helping me tweak it.

Sure thing, I love doing this ^^ Uhm, try a dark blue thatwould match the cloak with the day or night hairpin. I think I have an idea on how to make it all work. I have to go afk for anout 30 or so. Got take a family member home.

Rasengan 12-26-2007 02:05 AM

ok, this might be the last time I do this for today, I might have to leave soon.
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198639813.jpg

Divine_lil_brat 12-26-2007 03:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
ok, this might be the last time I do this for today, I might have to leave soon.
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198639813.jpg

Okay for that one, A darker blue hair would work really well with it.

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198632305.jpg

this one is really good too, but I think a blue head item nor pin could pull it all together.

Apocrypha 12-26-2007 11:24 AM

May I also have a rate?

nescia 12-26-2007 04:12 PM

Hello.
I'd like another rate.
I know that mine is pretty simple since it's using a gown, but I'd love some more item suggestions.
Thank you!

MagicalShine 12-26-2007 04:40 PM

Hi, would you mind rating my winter avatar, too? I can't buy anything you suggest at the moment but i can save for them to buy later^^

Rasengan 12-26-2007 06:28 PM

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198692790.jpg

I changed the hair to the skirt's color.

Dystopia 12-26-2007 06:45 PM

xD Rate me while I'm male?

Divine_lil_brat 12-27-2007 12:48 AM

@Apocrypha:

Of course you may ^^

Well it does look cute and matches for the most part. Though you do need some black on the top of you avi (head) to help bring balance to the black thats already in you avi. Right now the black starts at the balloon then stops at the feet, you need black up top so that way the black flows through out the avi and doesn't become the focal point. Right now my eye is dawn to the balloon and all the other blacks. SO at this point you need black up top and then some how bring in more dark blue to the avi.

7/10 so far most of the colors look nice together.

@Nescia:

Sure thing ^^

Well its very pretty and I love how you use all the winter items. The dark blue hairpin thing is pretty random though, but it does look nice in a sense. It kinda throws the avi off though because it is the only dark blue item on the avi. The panda is also random but I do see how it ties in the black of your hair/gloves/necklace to the bottom part of the avi. I'm curious if there is any othe rhand held that would work better with this avi other than the panda.

8/10 I think its very pretty though and reminds of little women ^^


@MagicalShine:


The flow start at the head and ends at the feet. The colors match and flow nicely together. My one big suggestion at this point would be to add a gold belt to help bring gold to the mid section of the avi and maybe a different hair color as well. Over all its cute and the colors match, well the hair doesn't.

7/10 Its cute and well thought out I would just do some tweaking to make the gold work with the avi better.

Divine_lil_brat 12-27-2007 12:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198692790.jpg

I changed the hair to the skirt's color.


I like it so much, but could you go darker with hair color? Over all it looks so nice, I'm so impressed with it^^

@Dystopia:

XD of course I can ^^

Well I don't like the blank expression on the avis face but I do like everything thing else. The colors work well and blend nicely. Tones match and compliment each others shades really well. I would think a arm badn with red in it would be nice or some sort of red gloves to help bring red to the avis arm or hands. I love how the fan matches the gold/white in the hairpin.

8/10 It looks good but that expression drives me insane. I think if it was changed if would make a world of difference.

Apocrypha 12-27-2007 01:00 AM

Thank you for the rate :D Any suggestion on what should I place to balance the black colors?

Divine_lil_brat 12-27-2007 01:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Apocrypha
Thank you for the rate :D Any suggestion on what should I place to balance the black colors?

http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/924.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/887.gif

Those could work if you want to keep with winter theme.

http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/381.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/641.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/635.gif

Any of the above could work. Use the avi creator if your unsure.

Apocrypha 12-27-2007 01:28 AM

Thanks! :D

This should work X333333

Dystopia 12-27-2007 01:41 AM

I tried all the other male mouths, but they all look so bad on my avatar. ._.;
xD I wish there was like, a seductive smirk I could use.

Rasengan 12-27-2007 01:41 AM

Thank you divine! Im really glad you like it as much as i do. *goes change hair color* Be right back :D\
*Is back*
http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198719220.jpg

Darkest blue I can get.


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