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i would love a rate ^.^

Thanks, Divine_lil_brat!
I had the hairpin fom heaven with this originally, but it blended to much for my liking and the Yumer ears layered strangely with the bonnet.
xD

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Originally Posted by Apocrypha

Thanks! :D

This should work X333333

Your welcome ^^

@Dystopia:

Yeah I know whatcha mean. A smirk would be awesome with that avi ^^

@Rasengan:
One shade lighter with the hair color and you got it ^^ I'm loving it so much XD

@Nescia:

XD yeah I could see that being odd. I think the ears would have been a bit much anyways.

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Originally Posted by vadeil

i would love a rate ^.^

I didn't forget about you ^^

Let me start by saying wow, it so pretty and all the colors match. The eye travels from head to toe, all the colors flow through out the avi and and the layering is great. I wish the pants were just a shade darker and the hairpins would pop more against the hair.

Over all 9.5/10 I love it, I really do but Those two key things bug me to no end. Great job though, It very well thought out and layered. Bravo ^^

thank you ^.^ i have to agree with those two key things.

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Originally Posted by vadeil

thank you ^.^ i have to agree with those two key things.

Yeah, its kinda sad that they don't :/ oh well, your avi still looks Pretty^^

HEY AGAIN! XD

I just made a new avatar... [ you may have to refresh? ]

And, I know the colors are a bit... off, to say the least. XD I am not expecting a good rate, because I know this avatar has many issues. Hahahah. But I thought that it all kinda flowed nicely and that everything kind of looked good together..

ANYWAYS, I just wanted to know what you think, and if you had any suggestions. (:

- I almost ALWAYS use one of the two masks, because otherwise the avatar looks incomplete to me. XD I WANT MY HAIR BACK. ):
- And, I'm currently trying to find a decent pair of red shoes to match the gloves and mask. D:

edit;
I'm about to change, so if you wouldn't mind this is the avatar I'd like to get your opinion on:

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199124809.png

How is mine doing? I'm liking the color combination really well but don't know if it's quite right yet...

Ok, I'm back and I got rid of the purple in my avi! Could I get a new critique for it?

Could I get mine critiqued? I feel like something is missing on it, but I don't know what >.< (trying to have items go with the fan)

Hello Everyone,

Sorry I've been sick for the past couple of day and haven't been on. I'll be back later today and I promise I'll get to everyone avi ^^

Thanks

Divine

Get well soon, Divine!<33

Do you like these pants better?

Oh im sorry to hear that divine. I hope you get well soon, oh and I wanted to ask you something so pm me as soon as you get back.

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear

Get well soon ^^

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Get well soon, Divine!<33

Do you like these pants better?

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Originally Posted by Rasengan

Oh im sorry to hear that divine. I hope you get well soon, oh and I wanted to ask you something so pm me as soon as you get back.

Awww thanks guys ^^ I feel a lot better today than I have in a few days XD But I am now back and will be fulling my promise ^^

@Muggles:

I do like those pants, though I do think the other one where more cute. These go well with the color scheme.

@Rasengan:

I'll write you ASAP ^^

Im happy that you are back! What I wanted to ask you was if you wanted to be a judge for my avatar contest.

Thanks Divine.<3 I'm glad you're feeling better.

I've never seen this thread around here before.
But then again I've only just started to frequent this forum. xD

Nice to see you around again Divine.

If you have the time could I get some advice from you on my avatar?
<3

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Well like always you make me smile with your randomness
^^ I love the color combo and how its busy but not over the top busy. Everything matches and the eye flow is head to toe. I wish hair would would with the mask, I think it would fill in all the blanks on your head lol XD My one big thing at this point would be the belt, it matches the star but pulls the eye to it like a magnet. Over all those its awesome and the colors work really well with each other though I do think the skirt is a shade to light...

9.5/10 It rocks but those 3 thing bug me the most, no hair (I know it can't be helped), the belt, and the skirt. :/

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Originally Posted by Rasengan

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198801446.jpg

Here we go. How do you like it?

So far I like that one and this one the best.

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1198632305.jpg

They're both really nice and I love the different shades in each. Its just hard to figure out which would be better. Both are a 8.5/10 They still need a lil something...

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Originally Posted by Nissa

How is mine doing? I'm liking the color combination really well but don't know if it's quite right yet...

Its very summery winter look ^^ Its very cute and the most of the colors match spot on. The flow is right and the over all outfit is adorable ^^ It kinda reminds me of a winter fairy. I would suggest a pair of gloves those, maybe a set in purple or light blue. Not white or dark blue, that would throw the whole thing off.

9/10 I love the color scheme and how well it all goes together. Bravo ^^

I'll get the rest of you in my next post ^^

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Originally Posted by Rasengan

Im happy that you are back! What I wanted to ask you was if you wanted to be a judge for my avatar contest.

Rasengan, I'd be thrilled to be a judge for your avi contest ^^ Thanks for asking me.

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok

Thanks Divine.<3 I'm glad you're feeling better.

Thanks Muggles, I'm glad about it too. I hate being sick XP

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Originally Posted by Korrye

lol yeah, it floats up and down the thread. XD

I'll rate yours in my next post with the other few avi I still have to rate ^^ so if you don't mind I'll make another post just for the rates and you'll be the third from the top in my next post.

Could I perhaps get a rate? I'm not really trying for the pick, I just need some advice. XP You seem very knowledgable <3

Your detailed rates always make me happy. XDD

Thanks so much for everything. O;

I agree with all of the flaws that you stated. The belt... I didn't really like it either. But when putting on a different belt something was just.. Off. So I left it. And then the skirt. I'd agree that it's too light, but I couldn't find anything better. Maybe now that a bunch of the skirts are unisex I can get something else? o; And last the hair. OH HOW I WANT IT BACK! I always wear these masks... XD I NEED HAIR! Hahaha.

Thanks again, and I'm glad you're back and feeling better. : DDDD

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Originally Posted by keokotheshadowfang

Ok, I'm back and I got rid of the purple in my avi! Could I get a new critique for it?

I looks nice and all the colors match...but it seems rather plain now. The flow is right , head to toe and the colors all match but I can't think for the life of me why it looks plain maybe if you added a hand item(s) it would help break up the plainness and make it pop. ^^

7/10 good start, it well thought out just needs a few tweaks to make it pop. ^^

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Originally Posted by Kaze-bear

Could I get mine critiqued? I feel like something is missing on it, but I don't know what >.< (trying to have items go with the fan)

Well for starters the snow flakes don't match... Its the only thing that is blue in a almost pure red avi.
I would at this point suggest adding some gold and lighter shades of red to match the fan and avi match as well as blend. I would suggest going to either the avi creator if you have it or going through the image library and taking a look at items that would match.

6/10 its good idea but in order for it to work, you'll have to work on it more and draw your colors from the fan itself. ^^

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Originally Posted by Korrye

Well me just start by saying, I love it. The colors look great together and the gold just pops against the darker colors. The scarf just makes the avi that much more interesting. The flow is head to to and the colors flow nicely along the avi and they all match/blend well together. It hot and cute all at the same time. I think the only thing I would try to add would a green hair pin to bring more green to the top.

9.5/10 I love it but I do think some green up top and some about the feet would be nice.

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Originally Posted by k i w i

Could I perhaps get a rate? I'm not really trying for the pick, I just need some advice. XP You seem very knowledgable <3

Well thank you ^^

I like the choice in color but I think you have to many colors and not enough balance with them. You have 6 colors and most of them are just a splash here and there. White: the headband, hair pin and socks Black: Hairpin, top, gloves, socks Red: Hairpin, hair, top, pants, staff, shoes Orange: Glasses, jacket, skirt Gold: Halo,Scarf, Belt, Shoes

I would suggest at this point going over you avi and picking 3 colors tops to work with right now and work with them. Once you have 3 colors as your primary, then and only then would I try being in another color for an accent.

8/10 I love the color scheme, I think once you have all the colors tamed it'll look great ^^

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

I try my best ^^ But as always Your avis always make me work harder and keep me on my game XD

I know, you seem to be a mask whore and I would be to but I love my just a lil bit to much to wear a mask and lose it. Have you every won adimn's pick? I'd be surprised of you haven't yet. All your avis are always amazing and so interesting. You current avi is so pretty, I love looking at it. Well done again ^^

I swear they're going to kill me one of these days for double posting XP