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Majinkoz 12-31-2007 08:43 PM

Okay, can someone tell me what they think of my avi...I don't knw if it's good or not...I don't have too many items and I know that I'm bad at avi making lol, so some help would definitely be appreciated. I would love to win admin's pick one day. ^^

Divine_lil_brat 12-31-2007 09:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Majinkoz
Okay, can someone tell me what they think of my avi...I don't knw if it's good or not...I don't have too many items and I know that I'm bad at avi making lol, so some help would definitely be appreciated. I would love to win admin's pick one day. ^^

I can tell you ^^

You have waaaayyy to much gold on this avi. Gold crown, gold hair, gold shoes, gold halo and even gold on the dress. I would suggest either changing the hair color or style if you don't want to change the color. Right now the hair is a sea of gold and its just overwhelming to look at. I would suggest red shoes to help tie in the red from the hairpin, necklace, belt, and lollipop. Maybe a pair of black gloves, I know there is a pair that has gold on them and that would work really well this avi. But adding more red is a must, red shoes would be the best idea at this point.

6/10 good start just try not to flood the avi with one color, specailly a color a bright as gold. ^^

Mozzetti 12-31-2007 11:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Divine_lil_brat

I try my best ^^ But as always Your avis always make me work harder and keep me on my game XD

I know, you seem to be a mask whore and I would be to but I love my just a lil bit to much to wear a mask and lose it. Have you every won adimn's pick? I'd be surprised of you haven't yet. All your avis are always amazing and so interesting. You current avi is so pretty, I love looking at it. Well done again ^^

I swear they're going to kill me one of these days for double posting XP


/late reply

XDDD ~ I'm glad I can keep you on your game. ;D

I've got some more avatars "in the works", just need to build up the funds. =P

And yeah. I'm a big mask whore. When I make cluttered avatars, I want the whole avatar to be cluttered. Leaving the face blank freaks me out, since I'm all OCD about my avatars. XD ~ Thanks for the compliment on this avatar. o; ~ I'd love to get an actual rate on it too, if you wouldn't mind. The only thing I can think of that it is missing is an Ayumui's Black Hat. It would help balance out the black on the head, and the hat isn't huge so it should work nice. Your thoughts?

And nope, never won admins pick. XDDD ~ It doesn't really surprise me though. Many people tend to not like the clutter that I come up with... Hahahha.

Also, quick question. Do you like my current avatar with the shell necklace or this avatar better;

http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/e...tti/5323-4.png

Rasengan 12-31-2007 11:26 PM

OMG! The new item is awesome! It so totally goes with my avi, I think that is what my avi needed.

Divine_lil_brat 12-31-2007 11:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

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XDDD ~ I'm glad I can keep you on your game. ;D

I've got some more avatars "in the works", just need to build up the funds. =P

And yeah. I'm a big mask whore. When I make cluttered avatars, I want the whole avatar to be cluttered. Leaving the face blank freaks me out, since I'm all OCD about my avatars. XD ~ Thanks for the compliment on this avatar. o; ~ I'd love to get an actual rate on it too, if you wouldn't mind. The only thing I can think of that it is missing is an Ayumui's Black Hat. It would help balance out the black on the head, and the hat isn't huge so it should work nice. Your thoughts?

And nope, never won admins pick. XDDD ~ It doesn't really surprise me though. Many people tend to not like the clutter that I come up with... Hahahha.


Haha I was going to ask if you rate or not, I was going to rate it regardless at one point but work picked up and drug me away :/

I agree that hat would look nice with this current avi and all that jazz. My one big concern is the color of the mask, I see you added that color in the avi but I'm not sure if I like how that turned out of not. It's kinda like stripes, like a streak of that color on the face, then the hips and again on the legs. kinda random but I like it. I don't think they have that color in any gloves or any hand items, so I guess its okay XD Over all though all the colors match and blend, the colors aren't over done and as far as I can tell it looks like you only used 4 -5 colors. Light/dark blue, black, teal, silver (The feet and the staff have silver on them.)

Over all though its very pretty and mellow compared all you wild avis. 9/10 A hat would do nicely with this avi.

Do you have it or saving up for it?



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Originally Posted by Rasengan
OMG! The new item is awesome! It so totally goes with my avi, I think that is what my avi needed.

well why don't you see and show me ^^ I think it would work better than anything we've tried so far XD

Mozzetti 12-31-2007 11:31 PM


Hhahaaha. Thanks for all the info & suggestions, again.
I do not have the hat at this time.. I had one, then sold it to a friend. Then I had another and gave it to another friend. I'll get it back soon though. XD

Also, I just edited my previous post with a question. :3

Divine_lil_brat 12-31-2007 11:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Hhahaaha. Thanks for all the info & suggestions, again.
I do not have the hat at this time.. I had one, then sold it to a friend. Then I had another and gave it to another friend. I'll get it back soon though. XD

Also, I just edited my previous post with a question. :3

I can't see the images due to the block on my work computer. Do you mind up loading it to the link I sent you?

and then I'll answer your question XD

Majinkoz 12-31-2007 11:35 PM

Okay thanks, I already switched my hair, and I may change it again, I'm still playing around with different styles and colors...and now I'm looking to get some good red shoes...any ideas?

I thought about the phoenix flats but I don't think it's the right shade of red that I'm looking for. XD

edit: And I think if my avi has black hair, it's too much black, what do you think?

Mozzetti 12-31-2007 11:36 PM


Whoops, I forgot. XD

Here it is;

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199143295.png

Just a change in necklace. XD

Divine_lil_brat 12-31-2007 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Majinkoz
Okay thanks, I already switched my hair, and I may change it again, I'm still playing around with different styles and colors...and now I'm looking to get some good red shoes...any ideas?

I thought about the phoenix flats but I don't think it's the right shade of red that I'm looking for. XD

edit: And I think if my avi has black hair, it's too much black, what do you think?

http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/917.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/563.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/552.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/449.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/89.gif

-Those could work in theory-

http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/244.gif
these if you choose to use red stockings. Or you could keep the gold shoes and use red stockings, just need some gloves now and I think you'll have it just about done.

I like the hair change thus far ^^



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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Whoops, I forgot. XD

Here it is;

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199143295.png

Just a change in necklace. XD


uhm, I kinda like you current one the best. Though the shirt on the other avi looks different and I like it better XD

Korrye 01-01-2008 12:19 AM

Thanks so much for the Rate Divine.
I do have a green butterfly pin but I was told it was too dark compared to the other green. Otherwise there aren't any other pins that I can think of. Do you have any suggestions?

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 12:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Korrye
Thanks so much for the Rate Divine.
I do have a green butterfly pin but I was told it was too dark compared to the other green. Otherwise there aren't any other pins that I can think of. Do you have any suggestions?


It doesn't look bad but it doesn't match either. I looked and I don't see anything that would match any better than that does. I guess at this point, don't worry about it.

Muggles Running Amok 01-01-2008 03:10 AM



-gets down on knees- Please, Divine, help me with my new avatar. : )


Mozzetti 01-01-2008 04:47 AM


GUESS WHO'S BACK! XD

This is kind of just a random avatar that I based off of the new pin.. I don't like it much, because it isn't as cluttered as I normally like, and I went against a mask and went for the hair! ... But I'd love to hear what you think. Hahahah. <3

EDIT || I changed. The more I looked at the previous one, the uglier it got. This one still is hideous, but I've got to go. XD ~ I'd still like a rate on my current, when you get the time though. Hahaha.

daashi 01-01-2008 10:41 AM

Hey Lil Brat! (You dont mind that I just called you that do you?)

Please rate my current avatar! Pretty please!

I would really like someone else thoughts on my avatar and why others don't seem to like mine. One of the Mene staff actually referred to my avatar as boring! :cry: Well not in so many words, but I caught their meaning.

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 07:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Muggles Running Amok


-gets down on knees- Please, Divine, help me with my new avatar. : )


-quirk brow- okaaayyyy... XD Of course I will.

Well at first glance it reminds me of Harry potter for some reason >.< don't ask, I don't know why. But I do think its very cute and cherry in a none holiday sense. My first big issue with this avi would that the body of the avi draped in black but the head has next to no black on because you really can't see the hairpin. If you were to change the hair you might have to end up changing more than just that, you'd have to add more light blue to the avi to bring in the belt and cloud of the harp. I would suggest finding a pair of light blue shoes that match the hair and go with a different scarf. If you want to change the hair color, I would suggest black and then find a white hairpin to pull in the white and blues. Maybe the hairpin of heaven would work if you did change the hair color. Maybe the new hairpin and scarf if you were to go to black hair.

http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/363.gif

->oh this just popped into my, if you use black hair you can use the halo to bring gold to the top as well as the new years pin with the heaven hair pin. Just a thought<- edit

As of right now 8.5/10 I really think its cute and love the colors you opted to use, but you do need to change a few things first before it will be great. ^^


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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

GUESS WHO'S BACK! XD

This is kind of just a random avatar that I based off of the new pin.. I don't like it much, because it isn't as cluttered as I normally like, and I went against a mask and went for the hair! ... But I'd love to hear what you think. Hahahah. <3

EDIT || I changed. The more I looked at the previous one, the uglier it got. This one still is hideous, but I've got to go. XD ~ I'd still like a rate on my current, when you get the time though. Hahaha.

wow 0.0 this is unlike you. I really don't like it TT The crown thingy is off as is the pot of gold. If you were to lose those items and replace them with:
Head items:
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/641.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/197.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/363.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/603.gif
^ in blue of course >.<

Hand held Items:
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/369.gif
http://www.menewsha.com/img/items/thumbnails/370.gif

Okay so why I've chose these were because of the colors and how they would help bring certain colors out in your avi. The black at to tie in the simple black on the avi with the heaven hairpin. But those are just my suggestions. If you wanted to add red to the avi you could try adding the new mask and the just adding the blue to the top with gold would work... then you could use the new sword and could keep to your theme of wearing masks ^^ Just ideas.

7/10 needs a lot of work >.<


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Originally Posted by daashi
Hey Lil Brat! (You dont mind that I just called you that do you?)

Please rate my current avatar! Pretty please!

I would really like someone else thoughts on my avatar and why others don't seem to like mine. One of the Mene staff actually referred to my avatar as boring! :cry: Well not in so many words, but I caught their meaning.

Nope, thats just fine ^^
Its not boring per say but almost everyone has those items equipped or has an avi similar to yours. If you want to make a unique avi try using older items or thinking your avi more throughly before making one. Right now you have no blue about the legs and it just seems done before. It you want it to pop try using the avi creator or looking through the shop at items that would look nice with your avi. I would loose the black boots and try a dark blue to balance out the blues through our avi.

6/10 it seems sloppy and unthoughtful. I like the colors you were trying to use. If you want heres an idea, loose the dark blue top and try with going with a light blue top with dark blue accents. ^^

Rasengan 01-01-2008 07:19 PM

Ok, i inserted the new pin into both avis. Tell me what you think. I kind of like the second one better, but I dont want to use the Hannukah shirt since i am already using two other items from that set, but its really hard to find a matching blue shirt. Maybe no shirt? and a sash or scarf? I don't know what to do!

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199214035.jpg

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199214067.jpg

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Oh and let me tell you more about the avatar contest. On January 18-22 some members will be running a anniversary event. I will be hosting the avatar contest, and I wanted to ask you to be a judge (you have amazing skills at this). I think there are two other judges.... but i am not sure yet.

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
Ok, i inserted the new pin into both avis. Tell me what you think. I kind of like the second one better, but I dont want to use the Hannukah shirt since i am already using two other items from that set, but its really hard to find a matching blue shirt. Maybe no shirt? and a sash or scarf? I don't know what to do!

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199214035.jpg

http://www.jctimagehosting.com/tfmsie2/1199214067.jpg

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Oh and let me tell you more about the avatar contest. On January 18-22 some members will be running a anniversary event. I will be hosting the avatar contest, and I wanted to ask you to be a judge (you have amazing skills at this). I think there are two other judges.... but i am not sure yet.

I like the second one best so far. Though I don't know if you'll need the crown with it....Might be to much gold on top. But it definitely is looking good. Have you though of the double gold belt?

As for the judge thing,Thanks^^ I'd love to it just let me know for sure and let me in on all the inner workings of the contest and so on. I'll be sure to be that weekend as much as I can^^

Rasengan 01-01-2008 07:42 PM

Ill give you a link to the contest rules and stuff.

I really do like the second one better, mm.... double belt? Ill try that. And I really want to keep the crown, Its my most precious item.

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Rasengan
Ill give you a link to the contest rules and stuff.

I really do like the second one better, mm.... double belt? Ill try that. And I really want to keep the crown, Its my most precious item.

I think the double belt would be a good add to the avi and I was looking at the crown and it isn't to much gold. ^^ so keeping would work out really well.

A link would be good, otherwise I might not know where to go. ^^

Mozzetti 01-01-2008 07:54 PM


Wait, what? XD

I'm not sure what avatar you just rated. I've changed so many times since I posted that. I shouldn't have. D:

I kept making hideous, unbalanced avatars. Hahhaha.

My current doesn't have any blue in it. So I really don't know which one you rated. But, my current also is really unbalanced at the moment. I'm still working on it. D:

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

Wait, what? XD

I'm not sure what avatar you just rated. I've changed so many times since I posted that. I shouldn't have. D:

I kept making hideous, unbalanced avatars. Hahhaha.

My current doesn't have any blue in it. So I really don't know which one you rated. But, my current also is really unbalanced at the moment. I'm still working on it. D:


The last one I rated was blue/green/gold/black. You had green hair, blue jacket, green stockings and the pot of gold.

It was random.....>.<

Mozzetti 01-01-2008 08:10 PM


OHH THAT ONE. I didn't even make that one. XD

A friend was on my account making avatars. Hahahah. But oh well. Everything I am trying today isn't working right. D:

Divine_lil_brat 01-01-2008 08:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Mozzetti

OHH THAT ONE. I didn't even make that one. XD

A friend was on my account making avatars. Hahahah. But oh well. Everything I am trying today isn't working right. D:


XD
Figures... I didn't think it was your work >.<

I don't even care for this one....its odd not random. Try going back to that one and adding the mask and some red items. I think it would work out better that way. You already have an awesome Red/gold avi. Try blue/green/red/gold!!!!! You can do it lol XD

Rasengan 01-01-2008 08:15 PM

http://www.menewsha.com/viewtopic.ph...=asc&start=435
There is the link, its like the third post. I shall make another avi with the double belt nao!


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