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jozpe 12-10-2007 11:11 PM

joz's poetry dump (feel free to comment/critique)
 
She was useless, defenseless
a bird without wings
Her piano broken on the floor,
shattered
the wood splitting
a hollow crunch

She was fixing herself,
a city filled with yellow hats
A hard shell, unbreakable
formidable
the plastic shiny
the inside hollow


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