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aonith 12-23-2007 11:21 PM

I need some comments before Inking x__X
 
Alright.
I was drawing a picture of some random kawaii girl, that went on a Christmas shopping. Actually, I think I made a good work, but there are still some things about her that make me unsure.
So guys, her destiny depends on you *__*
And how should I color her? Pencils? Photoshop?

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b2...th/holiday.jpg

Bonus!

A sketch that I did few months ago xD

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b2.../apothetic.jpg

zumbie 12-23-2007 11:24 PM

I would say photoshop XD

They're pretty though :3

Prince Butthead 12-23-2007 11:27 PM

wow, they are both really good, maybe you could add color to it but otherwise I think it looks amazing.

iClimax 12-23-2007 11:30 PM

W00t a bonus! Lol But yeah, it's pretty good you should definitly photoshop it and add a nifty little back ground :3 And then on the bonus, Ehh I dunno the hair looks kinda scritchy-scratchy to me. :3

aonith 12-23-2007 11:35 PM

Whoa! You people are fast! Never expected to get such a fast replies here >.<
Anyway, thank you! I'm glad, that you liked my first work. I Think I'll do even both: Photoshop and pencil coloring ^^
Well, about the bonus... I didn't actually care to make ger better. just faon a random picture from a big stock of my latest drawings xD

Lady Ariana 12-24-2007 12:39 AM

I was trying to figure out whether there was anything you need to fix before inking it and I couldn't pick anything out.
I would suggest a photoshop coloring, a soft cel shade would probably be pretty cute.

aonith 12-24-2007 12:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lady Ariana
I was trying to figure out whether there was anything you need to fix before inking it and I couldn't pick anything out.
I would suggest a photoshop coloring, a soft cel shade would probably be pretty cute.


Maybe, maybe... I'll try that If I'll get used againg to photoshop easilly.

Birdy 12-24-2007 01:05 AM

Oh too cute :']

Fabby 12-24-2007 01:07 AM

Fabby thinks pencil. :D
It's adorable.

kimu 12-24-2007 02:17 AM

They are both awsome, and I especially like how you did the first pic with the really cute random girl you drew <3 I think its just missing an outline.

love shiine* 12-24-2007 03:13 AM

Really well done.
I especially love the way you drew the shoes on the first one.

Dystopia 12-24-2007 04:32 AM

Both of them are very good!

I would say scan it into your computer, then try on Photoshop. Then use the original to color in pencils. xD

aonith 12-24-2007 09:59 AM

Aww! Thank you very much, guys :'D
I think I will do exactly as you told me, first ink then scan and after that try both styles >.<

Oh! Is there anyone who thinks that the girls face is too boyish?

Demari 12-24-2007 03:51 PM


The only thing that throws me off from your picture is that the hair is a bit rough, and the heel on the left foot seems to be longer than the right one (right and left as if you were the person, not as your looking at her)

aonith 12-24-2007 04:15 PM

Oh my! You are right!(About the heels)
I wonder hod I didn't see it before you mentioned.
Silly me :'D
Thank you!

Faye 12-24-2007 06:28 PM

  • oOoh. Way too cute. You have a nice style!

    If you're still debating, why don't you just scan it for photoshopping, and color the original copy?

    That's always a good deal.

A i 12-24-2007 06:56 PM

she'll look great if u know the right technique of colouring using colour pencil~
i was thinking about the kind of rough shading that would make her look like all snowy since its winter^^..if u know what i meant, sorry im not good in explaining ;P

Caeluma 12-24-2007 09:30 PM

:D I love them both they are wonderfull!

Takuto 12-24-2007 09:35 PM

I can't seem to find a single mistake on the picture! It is really nice. Good job. (your style is amazing.)

Amiiu 12-24-2007 11:08 PM

I love the first one, and the second one is also good except the hand looks a bit odd. As for coloring, I'm not sure @[email protected]

Satomi 12-25-2007 01:16 AM

Ooh! Those are great! You should totally CG them. The only thing I can point out are minor flaws. The legs should be just a taaaad bit fatter on the upper part. And for the shoes it's a little wierd. I guess it's a new fad or whatever, but umm... I don't know the definite word for it, but that hard part at the bottom of the shoe. I'll just call it the sole. For your sole, it only appears in the back of the shoe, but traditionally it goes throughout the entire bottom of the shoe. Like this. Sorry, I did it with a mouse...

evelinaxcore 12-25-2007 07:16 AM

Aw the first one's cute. =D
The second one is well drawn too. =3
Great job. =D

aonith 12-25-2007 11:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Faye
  • oOoh. Way too cute. You have a nice style!

    If you're still debating, why don't you just scan it for photoshopping, and color the original copy?

    That's always a good deal.

Yep. This is my latest plan. * Goes inking*

Quote:

Originally Posted by A i
she'll look great if u know the right technique of colouring using colour pencil~ i was thinking about the kind of rough shading that would make her look like all snowy since its winter^^..if u know what i meant, sorry im not good in explaining ;P

Ah, yeah! I think I understood what you wanted to say *__*


Quote:

Originally Posted by Satomi
Like this. Sorry, I did it with a mouse...


I got that ^^
Thanks!

Professor Lily 12-25-2007 09:13 PM

I think this picture is really good! I would not change anything on it.

P. Kairy 12-25-2007 09:49 PM

  • Maybe long hair?
    When I first looked at it, I tough it was boy, no offense or anything, just telling my opinion.

    I'm sorry if it makes ya feel bad in any way. D:

    Btw, I love your style. ♥


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