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maxiekun 12-25-2007 11:44 PM

What do you think?
 
I just finished this freebie for someone in the freebie forums.
I wanted to see what people thought about it and maybe get some useful tips to make it better.
Another reason I'm posting it here is to ask what people would pay for a piece like this in Mene. I'm new to Mene, so I still don't understand how much the currency actually equals.
Again any assistance helps. <33

http://i14.tinypic.com/6tk2s11.jpg

http://i17.tinypic.com/6pog9jt.jpg

http://i3.tinypic.com/7ymk56d.jpg

Chidori 12-25-2007 11:50 PM

i would pay like 100 gold
its really good

Arousal 12-25-2007 11:53 PM

Oh thats great!

I love it
and i'm sure
you could make lots
by opening a shop. (:
I'd pay 50/100g for it.

maxiekun 12-25-2007 11:58 PM

What about a fully body like this?

http://i17.tinypic.com/6pog9jt.jpg

P. Kairy 12-25-2007 11:58 PM

  • Awww so damn cute!
    Make me one!! D:

    Lolz it's beautiful, I love it. ♥

Chidori 12-26-2007 12:03 AM

100 to 150 for full

Viki 12-26-2007 12:03 AM

I'd pay around 100 too ^^
It's real cute <3

P. Kairy 12-26-2007 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maxiekun
What about a fully body like this?

http://i17.tinypic.com/6pog9jt.jpg

  • The pose it's really smexy! ;D
    Buut the right eye is way to big compared to the other one, I understand the perspective of eyes and such, but maybe the right eye is a little too exagerated. ^^;

    Still, I think it's great, Gaia huh? :o
    What program do ya use? I still have some problems with the inking part.

maxiekun 12-26-2007 12:05 AM

Thanks Chidori, Arousal, P. Kairy, Viki.
That helps alot. <33

maxiekun 12-26-2007 12:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by P. Kairy
  • The pose it's really smexy! ;D
    Buut the right eye is way to big compared to the other one, I understand the perspective of eyes and such, but maybe the right eye is a little too exagerated. ^^;

    Still, I think it's great, Gaia huh? :o
    What program do ya use? I still have some problems with the inking part.

Well, the first image is all cg. Tablet and Photoshop work.
The second one (full body) was traditionally done, sketched, inked, photoshop cged, etc.

Yes, Gaia. .___.;;

Dystopia 12-26-2007 04:39 AM

=D I love it!

The bangs on the first one look a little awkward, though.

Satomi 12-26-2007 04:41 AM

The only big flaw is the space between the right eye and the right cheek/part of the face. There needs to be less space there. Otherwise, there are only minor flaws like the top part of the head is a little too small, the highlighting and shading of the hair, etc. But those are user preferences. It's a great picture!

maxiekun 12-26-2007 04:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dystopia
=D I love it!

The bangs on the first one look a little awkward, though.

Those aren't supposed to be bangs. ;___;

Maria-Minamino 12-26-2007 03:14 PM

Your style is really cute. But to make it better - I would say work on the shading for the hair - it looks really messy with the highlights in there. The shading of it (the darker) looks really good though. also - the bangs look awkward - it looks like someone cut off her bangs entirely and she doens't have much there. but it could be pushed back and I could be wrong. You drew the crown really well and the expression is totally adorable!!! and your eye style is cute as well! The ears are really nicely done as well. and I like the shades you picked out for the skin - they look nice :D

maxiekun 12-26-2007 04:13 PM

Yea... I'm not very good at coloring, unless it's something like cell shading. x; I've been trying to work with my coloring more so I get better, but I don't seem to be improving much.

I'm glad you like my eye style, like the crown, and the expression on her face.
Overall I really enjoyed drawing the picture, and I wanted to make it fun and appealing to look at.
It seems that her hairline is a problem, I'll have to find a way to make them appear more... hairline-y?

Thanks for your help Maria-Minamino

Krieger_Alice 12-26-2007 04:27 PM

i like them both. i would pay 100 for the first one. but for the second one i would def. pay 150 and up to 190! they are realy good. good job! :wink:

Satomi 12-26-2007 06:39 PM

190, and not 200? Strange lol. But I think your full-body is definitely better than the headshot. You seem to work best with less (the headshot is very large compared to the head of the full body).

aonith 12-26-2007 11:52 PM

Aww! I like the styla you draw in. Their faces are really kawaii!
Yeah, i think you need a bit more practice in coloring, but that's not a problem for you, I think.
Keep up the good work <3

Bunnyy 12-27-2007 12:56 AM

  • that's really cute! i like the bright colors =)

orgasm 12-27-2007 12:59 AM

aww. she's adorable! i really like her hair. 8) i just think her tooth shouldn't be there.. other than that she's too cute. very good, maan. [x

maxiekun 12-27-2007 08:51 AM

Krieger_Alice
Satomi
aonith
Bunnyy
orgasm
Thank you ^^ Your input is appreciated.

I also wanted to know what you would charge for a piece like this:
http://i3.tinypic.com/7ymk56d.jpg

Again
I'd appreciate if you would tell me what you would pay for the quality of the coloring and the line work etc.
I'd also like to know if you know of place in which I can improve. ^^

Critisms is nice! =D
Just don't be too harsh on me. I've a weak heart. ;__; <3

Thanks again to everyone.

Maria-Minamino 12-27-2007 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by maxiekun
Overall I really enjoyed drawing the picture, and I wanted to make it fun and appealing to look at.
It seems that her hairline is a problem, I'll have to find a way to make them appear more... hairline-y?

Thanks for your help Maria-Minamino

well having fun is the most important part of all :D

and for the hair line - just try to make it not as....jagged I guess. I have the same problem - one of my characters that I draw all the time has parted bangs on the side so the rest is just hairline and I'm still never satisfied with the results.

I would pay at least 200 for your newest picture. But I'm not very good at pricing mene art. *so used to gaia prices*

maxiekun 12-27-2007 04:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maria-Minamino
I would pay at least 200 for your newest picture. But I'm not very good at pricing mene art. *so used to gaia prices*

I understand what you mean. That's why I've been asking around alot. ^^;;

suppi 12-27-2007 07:41 PM

Ooh, it's a style I've never seen before. xD They all look awesome, but you could work on the coloring a bit more. n-n

I love the expression on the first one. xD It gives you a sense of.. happiness. :lol: Haha~ the cat is cute too. n-n
As for the second pic, it's just adorable. x3 I really the eyes too. <33
And the third one looks great! The roses on the pin look so... realistic. o: But something looks wrong with the nose... or the shading..
But overall, you did a great job! ^^
edit; Sorry, I really don't know what to price them.. D; Even if I did, it wouldn't help you much. ><

maxiekun 12-27-2007 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by suppi
Ooh, it's a style I've never seen before. xD They all look awesome, but you could work on the coloring a bit more. n-n

I love the expression on the first one. xD It gives you a sense of.. happiness. :lol: Haha~ the cat is cute too. n-n
As for the second pic, it's just adorable. x3 I really the eyes too. <33
And the third one looks great! The roses on the pin look so... realistic. o: But something looks wrong with the nose... or the shading..
But overall, you did a great job! ^^
edit; Sorry, I really don't know what to price them.. D; Even if I did, it wouldn't help you much. ><

Thanks ^^
I'm really glad you like my artwork. <33

I have no idea what to price these at either. That's why I've been asking. ^^;;


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