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Satomi 12-30-2007 02:30 AM

Satomi ~ 2 ~ Bass Guitarist
 
*Bad and good critique is appreciated!
I would rather you guys share your honest opinion,
instead of just saying "That picture is so awesome!"
or "That picture sucks... get some drawing lessons".
Give me some reasons or pointers, if possible.*


Bass Guitarist

As with my previous picture, and ones coming up, I did this in class on *gasp* lined paper. I saw a picture like this before on deviantart, but I can't remember it well. I originally drew the guy with the guitar and plus signs coming out. Then I added the plus sign under him as well as the lighting thingie above. Then I added those rings... There was alot of erasing and stuff. I have no idea how bass guitars are suppose to look either. There were 3 shades, white, gray, and black. I tried not to used different shades of gray.

Teive 12-30-2007 03:47 AM

Really I like it, but for some reason it seems lacking in something. I'm not artist, but I do love art. My best friend loves to draw and she's a very harsh critic, but I tend to look at different styles...
Again, I like it, but I guess it's just kind of boring. It's not the color scheme but maybe a crowd or his shadow. Something to stand out, other then the fact that almost everything is plus signs.

Satomi 12-30-2007 04:16 AM

Hmm, I get what your saying. I would like it alot better if I colored it with bright fluorescent colors. This is more like a doodle though. If I really liked my pictures, I would scan it and do the whole shizzam with coloring and such.

Teive 12-30-2007 04:43 AM

Heh yeah. Though I'm sure if you really REALLY wanted to your pics could look awesome. Cause for a doodle, that's damn good. I mean art shops are kinda big right now....

Besides playing with color and shades is like the best part of art...I think so anyway.

Faye 12-30-2007 07:42 AM

Whoot for line paper and pencil!
Cool 'X's.

The feet are weird though. D;
And may I suggest putting a shadow under him?

Amiiu 12-30-2007 10:24 PM

Like other said, a shadow for him would be nice. Also, his right [our left] foot seems bigger than the other foot.

Satomi 12-30-2007 10:40 PM

Well most of my paper and pencil pictures are on-going doodles. One day I just draw a bit of the drawing, then each day I just add to it, sometimes too much lol. This is actually one of my favorites and coloring it with CG would be pretty easy, but there's already a pic like this out there so... I guess not. And I'm not so good when it comes to shoes... I can draw bare feet pretty good, but my shoes are always disproportionate or awkwardly positioned.


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