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Abiogenecist 01-02-2008 11:59 PM

Something I drew with the computer
 
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q...st/Final-1.jpg

What do you think? I made the lineart in Flash then colored in Photoshop. It took me hours... and I had to look at Abercrombie and Fitch model pictures to make sure I was shading the abs right XP
Comments would be highly appreciated.

^_^

Dystopia 01-03-2008 12:01 AM

I say you have a great grasp on anatomy and coloring. The side of his face looks a little weird, and the eyes are a bit small, though.

Lore 01-03-2008 12:02 AM

I have -no- clue why, but drawn nipples always make me giggle. xD These did, too.

Anyway, this is actually pretty good! It's weird how that one arm juts out to the side and is cut off since it makes the pose unnatural, but other than that, it's not bad! Always nice to see muscles, I say.

Popcorn Gun 01-03-2008 12:06 AM

The body looks great but something is lacking with the face. Try drawing headshots for a little bit so you can focus on facial shape and features.
But great body.
x' D
I really wish I could do male anatomy.
x' P

The right arm seems a bit bit towards where the picture stops.

Takuto 01-03-2008 12:09 AM

The face looks weird.
The body is great thoguh.

Abiogenecist 01-03-2008 12:15 AM

Thank you, my beautiful maidens, for appreciating my drawing. Strange yet amusing, I attracted female viewers. :D

The side of the face looks wierd? Hmn. Perhaps. I'll take your advise, Miss Popcorn Gun, of head drawings. I'm not sufficient with 2/4 and 3/4 head tilts, but I am practicing, and this is the purpose of the picture.

Nipples, ha-ha, Miss Lore, they amuse me also. XD. However, you see, I'm aiming for a style that's 50% realism and 50% anime figure. That's why I need the nipples. =p. And the pose is kinda' awkward, rest assured my next drawing will have a better position. My next aim is to draw with dynamic positioning.

Miss Dystopia, the eyes are small? Hmn, I've always thought it was okay. But I'll try to make them bigger next time, albeit I'm afraid I'll destroy a part of him. He's meant to be a "boy next door" character,which means boyish features, not so much of a bishounen...

Dreamz 01-03-2008 12:18 AM

All I can say is...0.0 wow a buff man! :o

Abiogenecist 01-03-2008 12:21 AM

Still female viewers. I'm finding this strangely amusing. He-he.

Oh yeah, another pic I draw of him.

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q...ist/NewPic.jpg

The pose looks awkward, I know. I was supposed to draw a background where he is lying on something soft, like a bed, but I lost my patience and quit. XP

Berginyon 01-03-2008 12:31 AM

An idealized self-portrait, perhaps? ^^

Abiogenecist 01-03-2008 12:37 AM

Hmn... maybe... >.>

I'm not sure... Though I'm sure the guy is my main RP character and my imaginary friend... XP And my upcoming Menewsha avatar also.

Lore 01-03-2008 12:42 AM

.. Miss.. MISS? D8 *pang of heart ache* I'm male!

And that last picture is a lot better! It looks really, really familiar, though. o: Did you reference it from something?

edit: May I also suggest tweaking the noses a bit? I've noticed they're a little bit sharp. Maybe sliiightly rounding out the point of it would be of some benefit?

Some Random Randomness 01-03-2008 12:43 AM

Mmm. It's mostly the face I have problems with. The body looks great, the pose is really fine, but the face always looks comic compared to the rest of the body.

Maybe try a bit more angular face with more shading?

Penny 01-03-2008 01:17 AM

Good stuff. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Nice muscle structure.
I'd work on putting the highlights further from the edges of the body. If that makes any sense. It would make it look more 3d.
Much improved in the second pic. That coat is to die for.

Kadrias 01-03-2008 01:18 AM

Ohmigod, you are amazing at drawing chests!! :lol:

I don't see anything wrong with the body, but as the others say, the face/head looks a tad off. From the left, its like its going in too much right about where the eye is. It's fine to emphasize the cheeks a bit, but you may want to lower that inward part a tad. The expressions are a little lacking too, but it looks like you've really got anatomy down!! <333

I agree with Popcorn, try practicing faces and headshots to get the hang of it, 'cause you certainly have the body down. xDD

Oh and, of course, gorgeous shading!! owo

Amiiu 01-03-2008 02:13 AM

I agree with Some Random Randomness, the head overall just seems more comic like, it seems to have a different kind of shading than the rest of the body. Also the hair, although everything else look more realistic, the hair seems very...um..non realistic [can't think of a better word xP] Also, the curled fingers look kind of strange to me, but other than that, I love the shading and coloring ^^


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