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J-Adeas 01-03-2008 02:42 AM

Storyline Art
 
I drew this a while ago to go with a story I'm writing. The guy in the background is an alien and that's why he's soo short. :lol:

Anyway, here it is. Let me know what I can work on and if it's any good.

chibilady18 01-03-2008 02:46 AM


Its very good and I think it would look very nice colored! there is only one little thing I can see and thats that his head looks a little to small for his body.

J-Adeas 01-03-2008 02:49 AM

I noticed that... but that's the way I had him pictured, so I kept it that way.

Amiiu 01-03-2008 02:51 AM

It might just be me, but for the person on the table, their body slowly gets smaller as you go down from the waist, like, the feet seem a bit to small. Also, the folds on the guy's shirt look awkward, and the way his hand is holding the pencil and writing. Also, his hair seems to be glued to his head or something and his left foot seems smaller than the right. Other than that, it's nice ;]

J-Adeas 01-03-2008 02:54 AM

Kay, I'll work on all that. I redid the feet as the girl that was teaching me to draw told me the feet were too big. The wrinkles, yeah I suck at those. The hair... yup that too. As for the feet... he's supposed to be stepping forward and the back foot partly up. It was the best I could do. But thankyou and I'll work on that.


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